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BloomingRose
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since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092
Florida

0 posted 2000-08-26 09:51 PM


It's Midnight

I hear the sound of a mighty trumpet calling
I see the moment, I hold my breath

Midnights moon cast beams of light
serene clouds part in awe and reverence
the white horse glows in the moonlight
straining against the winds

A robe dipped in blood drapes the king
many crowns adorn his head
fire in his eyes look through me
he is the word of God...

It's the midnight cry

I fall on my knees, on my face
in awe of who he is

In the twinkling of an eye
he takes my hand...

BloomingRose



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WhtDove
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245
Illinois
1 posted 2000-08-26 10:14 PM


You've put Revelations into a good poem!
I love this! Excellent work!


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Alle'cram
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since 2000-02-28
Posts 1816
Texas
2 posted 2000-08-26 10:48 PM


I think you need to change your name to "Full blossomed Rose".  Just beautiful.
Agreeing with WhtDove, great job putting scriptures in poem and I think you did a exceptional job writing the interpretations. "The fire in his eyes",(as He see's all), "looking through me".Loved it.
Marcy

"A robe dipped in blood drapes the king
many crowns adorn his head
fire in his eyes look through me
he is the word of God..."


Lakewalker
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since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289
On the streets w/ people
3 posted 2000-08-27 12:59 PM


oh, this is just great!  Very well done
BSC
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since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919
New York, USA
4 posted 2000-08-27 01:33 PM


Oh Blooming, this is so beautiful.  Loved every line, most especially "in the twinkling of an eye He takes my hand."  Terrific job.  Bonnie
BloomingRose
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since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092
Florida
5 posted 2000-08-27 04:12 PM


Thank you all for your kind words.

Tis soon my friends...


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