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Elizabeth Santos
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269
Pennsylvania

0 posted 2000-08-26 08:01 AM


He Comforts Me

He wakes me with an orchestra each day
Of warbling and twittering of bird
Before the sun has even beamed a ray
I’m wakened by the sweetest music heard

He gradually casts light into the room
A sun that lights the world so radiantly
That in its power it wakens every bloom
And touches every petal savoringly

He causes mist to rise up from the earth
And cleanses me with hope and peaceful calm
That I may face a new and better day
As I drink in the early morning balm

He warms my heart with friendships and with love
To comfort me in times of stress and pain
He gives pleasure to my eye and to my mind
That I find beauty in the falling rain

He’s surrounded me with splendor every day
With rainbow colors in sweet floral hews
Or icy wonderlands of crystal flakes
A glittering mantle ‘gainst the heavenly blues

As daylight fades he spreads across the sky
A mural of the crimsons and the golds
Reflecting off the clouds of opal white
As the sunset of our day finally unfolds

Then as the twilight comes, deep purple tones
On pond and stream declare the day is done
And so no matter what degree of pain
Throughout the day, a hundred gifts I’ve won

Troubles that arise in daylight hours
That cause my heart to weep in pure dismay
Are lessened by the beauty of the flower
And wiped away by stars heavenly display

And so I lay again in sweet repose
And thank God for the gifts that He bestows
The little stars look down and comfort me
I fall asleep in soft tranquillity

Elizabeth Santos

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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354
Listening to every heart
1 posted 2000-08-26 08:30 AM


He, and thee, comfort us all...

well done, Elizabeth...let us praise His goodness...

ellie LeJeune
Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156
King of Prussia, PA USA
2 posted 2000-08-26 09:33 AM


Dearest Liz; The angels sing God's praise and you rival their voices as you praise Him with you poets pen that creates a tapestry of words woven with such beauty and exquisite delight. Love, Ellie

Summers haunting melody
that awakens
the butterflies,
calling them to join
the dance
in their silent song
of praise to God.

eL

Alle'cram
Senior Member
since 2000-02-28
Posts 1816
Texas
3 posted 2000-08-26 10:52 AM


Liz, This is so beautiful! I found myself "feeling" this poem as I spoke the words aloud.  What a wonderful job putting God's gifts to poem. Absolutely loved it! Marcy
Lakewalker
Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289
On the streets w/ people
4 posted 2000-08-26 11:56 AM


He has given us so much, and you've written of it so well.  Thank you for sharing this

And so no matter what degree of pain
Throughout the day, a hundred gifts I’ve won


WhtDove
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245
Illinois
5 posted 2000-08-29 09:08 PM


Liz it takes my breath away! Seeing that sunset and the sunrise, and the stars out at night, I just can't help but to take pause and be thankful for such beauty.

God keep blessing you abundantly Liz! ~Hugs~

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Be an organ donor...give your heart to Jesus!

Janie
Member
since 2000-08-13
Posts 158

6 posted 2000-08-30 12:05 PM


This is a beautiful painting!

Janie


juliet_2u
Senior Member
since 2000-07-23
Posts 1125
North Carolina
7 posted 2000-08-31 12:06 PM


Oh sweet Liz this is breathtaking. I'm sitting here just in awe. How truly lovely.
Juls

Lighthousebob
Member Elite
since 2000-06-14
Posts 4725
California
8 posted 2000-09-01 11:16 AM


   Now, That's what I call a gooooood day!  I believe that you bring honor to the Creator when you give notice like this to all that He has created for our pleasure.  Thank you for taking particular notice and sharing your discovery with us.  God truly made all things good. God Bless You,  Bob <><

[This message has been edited by Lighthousebob (edited 09-01-2000).]

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