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jwesley
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0 posted 2000-08-21 08:08 PM



The Cross Of Wood

It wasn't just an old ship
it was ancient.
Even before it was built
it's wood was old.
The trees that formed it's beams
and planks and mast
were much older than the men
who cut them down;
much older than the men
that built the ship;
much older than all
save the rock and ground
upon which they grew.
They'd seen the birth of Christ,
seen the years He'd spent as a boy,
saw him become a man,
a prophet,
and that's when the first of the trees
was cut down; the one that formed
the cross upon which He died;
the rest of which
now stands tall and mighty
as the ship's main mast.
The ship's wood is worm riddled,
old and rotted now
at the bottom of the sea;
that is, all but the main mast
which stands tall and mighty,
still strong and ready
waiting,
waiting,
awaiting His return.

w. james beard, jr.


© Copyright 2000 Wesley James Beard, Jr. - All Rights Reserved
Lone Wolf
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1 posted 2000-08-21 08:10 PM


jwesley,

Awesome writing here.  This was wonderful.  He gave so much for us all.  You have said it well.  Great writing.  

Lone Wolf


Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats

jwesley
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2 posted 2000-08-21 09:23 PM


Thanks, LW. This was written for a theme: Wood.

jwesley


Denise
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3 posted 2000-08-21 11:23 PM


Very well written. This reminded me of those passages in the Bible that say that all of nature longs for His return, even if that was not your theme! It boggles the mind, doesn't it, how we humans are here for such a short time, but some things (like wood, stone, etc.) will be around soooooo much longer...great poem!

Denise

Marge Tindal
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4 posted 2000-08-22 12:39 PM


JWesley~
This is stunning.
I enjoyed it very much.
~*Marge*~


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Auguste
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5 posted 2000-08-22 04:13 AM


I loved this one.  He is my Hope, always...thank you...just wonderful!

Michael





jwesley
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6 posted 2000-08-22 11:00 AM


Thanks for your comments, Denise, Marge, and Michael...they are much appreciated.

jimmy

WhtDove
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7 posted 2000-08-25 11:03 PM


Ok, it's here and I'm moving it up  


Alle'cram
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8 posted 2000-08-26 11:23 AM


YES, YES, YES!!!  Jwestley, this is Wonderful!  Oh, how I loved the analogy of the wood, trees and ship with the ages to time and our Heavenly Father and Jesus. Yes, Lord, come quickly! I love this! (my 'puter ben' down, sorry for the delayed response).  VERY, VERY well written.   Love, Marcy
Sunshine
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9 posted 2000-08-26 11:46 AM


J...marvelous...I wonder at your inspiration,  and regret not! Thank you for sharing!
Lakewalker
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10 posted 2000-08-26 12:06 PM


I enjoyed this a lot, it's very well written.  I'm glad I had a chance to read this one.
Lighthousebob
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11 posted 2000-08-27 10:12 AM


I especially liked the analogy between the cross on which Jesus died and the mast of the ship sunk to the bottom of the ocean... still awaiting the Lord's return.  A beautiful poem.  And Thank You White Dove for bringing this poem back up... I missed it the first time. Bob <><
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