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deleeme
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since 1999-10-09
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NEW ENGLAND, USA

0 posted 2000-08-25 06:47 AM


In deep contrition
Ashamed of my sinful self
I cling to the cross.

Christ alone can save
In Love I reach out to Him
Make me "Free indeed!"

With Joy, I praise God
My Heart attunes to His Will
His Goodness abounds.

Lord direct my path
Leading me in Your Right Way
Heav'n above to find!

                  


"GOD GIVES- but man must open his hand." (German Proverb)


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ellie LeJeune
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since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156
King of Prussia, PA USA
1 posted 2000-08-25 06:57 AM


Oh! David; These are precious indeed! I especially love this line..."my heart attunes to His will"...I feel so blessed and filled to overflowing at the touch of Grace that I feel from your so inspiring words, that could only come from a true minister of His love, thank you,  Love, Sis

Summers haunting melody
that awakens
the butterflies,
calling them to join
the dance
in their silent song
of praise to God.

eL

Lakewalker
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since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289
On the streets w/ people
2 posted 2000-08-25 01:24 PM


Thank you for sharing these, they are wonderfully done!  
BSC
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since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919
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3 posted 2000-08-25 09:57 PM


WOW!!!!  David I am so very impressed, these are all simply wonderful!  Bonnie
Alle'cram
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since 2000-02-28
Posts 1816
Texas
4 posted 2000-08-26 11:29 AM


David, WONDERFUL, WONDERFUL (standing up cheering).  I love this.  It's light, it's wise, powerful, meek and from your heart as you penn this prayer/poem to our Great Creator. It's hard to write something light that packs so much power as you have here. YES   YES      lOvE,  Marcy
Dennis L. White
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since 2000-02-17
Posts 1463
Michigan, U.S.A.
5 posted 2000-08-26 11:41 AM


David,
  These are humble, honest and uplifting. The path Up starts on our knees!
Dennis :^)

Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
6 posted 2000-08-26 11:55 AM


David, thank you for your amazing ways...
Janie
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since 2000-08-13
Posts 158

7 posted 2000-08-27 04:46 PM


I especially like "I cling to the cross." I think I must be clinging next to you.

Janie


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