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BSC
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0 posted 2000-08-16 08:43 AM


Crisp white curtains gently sway,
As a cool summer's breeze blows through,
Windows reflect the morning sun,
A few clouds infringe on sky blue.
Soft melodies from delicate song birds,
Chattering squirrels beginning their day,
Rustles come from behind a bush,
Where two kittens are hard at play.
The smell of the fresh brewed coffee,
Interlaced with the fragrance of rose,
Oh what a glorious morning this is,
It's even heard in the old rooster's crows.
You are really out there today Lord,
In the hush of the whispering breeze,
In the blossom of every flower,
In the gentle dance of the trees.
I can see You in the glistening beams,
As they make their way to the ground,
I can see You in my own backyard,
And in every yard around.
You are there to take all the burdens,
At the start of this beautiful day,
And to show me all of Your wonders,
In this most magnificent way.





[This message has been edited by BSC (edited 08-16-2000).]

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juliet_2u
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since 2000-07-23
Posts 1125
North Carolina
1 posted 2000-08-16 08:51 AM


Bonnie Bonnie, ahhh how this made me smile. What a wonderful way to see the new morning. The images I saw were so sweet and tender. That's our Lord for ya though. He gives such lovely things for us to see and write about.
Bless you,
Juls

[This message has been edited by juliet_2u (edited 08-16-2000).]

Alle'cram
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since 2000-02-28
Posts 1816
Texas
2 posted 2000-08-16 09:51 AM


Dear Bonnie,
  The grandest images of all, is when we view them through His eyes, as you did when writing this perfect poem. Having been blessed mightly this a.m.; this is icing on top of the icing for me.   Love, Marcy

Cerenity
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since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637
Escondido-California
3 posted 2000-08-16 06:45 PM


Hi BSC,

This is lovely, I start my day outside almost everyday and I know what you are seeing here in your poem, it brings tears of joy on these mornings, thank you for sharing yours with us.

Love, Cerenity


"God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist.
We have to be reminded that He exist!"

(Writer Unknown)


ellie LeJeune
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since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156
King of Prussia, PA USA
4 posted 2000-08-16 08:39 PM


Dear Bonnie; You have the heart and the eyes of a poet inspired by His Love! This poem is an exquisite example. I feel so refreshed and renewed as I read every perfect line.
Love, Ellie
P.S. Thank you for your always encouraging, loving responses to my poems.

Summers haunting melody
that awakens
the butterflies,
calling them to join
the dance
in their silent song
of praise to God.

eL

LoveAll
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since 2000-05-24
Posts 148
B'dale, USA
5 posted 2000-08-16 10:49 PM


What an amazing poem!  I love mornings that start like that...you can just feel God's presence more than ever!  You truely captured that moment.  I pray that God will keep speaking such wonderful words through you.  I love it!  
God Bless

Those who hope in the Lord will renew their strength. They will soar on wings like eagles; run and not grow weary, walk and not be faint. Isaiah 40:3

Lighthousebob
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since 2000-06-14
Posts 4725
California
6 posted 2000-08-17 02:37 AM


What refreshing words... I can feel my burdens lift into the aroma of this lovely poem...  God Bless You,  Bob <><
Lakewalker
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7 posted 2000-08-17 12:06 PM


What a great poem, wonderful use of the senses and a great message!
Elizabeth
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8 posted 2000-08-17 10:35 PM


Beautiful!

Elizabeth


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