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Alle'cram Senior Member
since 2000-02-28
Posts 1816Texas |
The Window opens Sundry sounds intermingled Displaying light show |
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ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA |
Marcy; This is exquisite! Wow! A real beauty of a first haiku! Love, ellie Summers haunting melody that awakens the butterflies, calling them to join the dance in their silent song of praise to God. eL |
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BSC
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since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919New York, USA |
Ahhhh Marcy....beautiful! We're having one of those "light shows" right now....Great job. Bonnie |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Marcy you've perfected it! Just the right words you've used here. You're very good at these! What a great description! |
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juliet_2u Senior Member
since 2000-07-23
Posts 1125North Carolina |
Very lovely Marcy. I wish I understood what this haiku stuff was. All I see are touching words. Juls |
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Dennis L. White Senior Member
since 2000-02-17
Posts 1463Michigan, U.S.A. |
Marcy, You have written a beautiful haiku here! WAY TO GO! Dennis :^) |
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Alle'cram Senior Member
since 2000-02-28
Posts 1816Texas |
Thanks to all who read and replied, I appreciate much. Thanks All, Marcy [This message has been edited by Alle'cram (edited 08-14-2000).] |
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deleeme Senior Member
since 1999-10-09
Posts 1766NEW ENGLAND, USA |
Marcy , this is an incredible description of a storm- the windows of heaven opening and the attending display of power. Very Good! David |
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Tramp Poet Senior Member
since 2000-01-06
Posts 754Could Be Anywhere... |
Gracious sister heart of Love showing "the Way" bleeding... "Tis ink coming from his arm, Captain!" |
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