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First Haiku to you!

Stephanos

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since 2000-07-31

Posts 3618
Statesboro, GA, USA

0 posted 2000-08-10 10:21 PM

Destined to fill the Earth
Grand yet little known
The Kingdom of God

Denise

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

1 posted 2000-08-10 10:54 PM

Very good, Stephanos, and so true!

Denise

Lakewalker
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since 2000-08-05

Posts 3289
On the streets w/ people

2 posted 2000-08-10 10:57 PM

What great words and wonderful message! But, I'm going to be picky here. A haiku has 17 syllables in a 5-7-5 pattern. You didn't quite follow that here, but it certainly doesn't take away from the beauty of this poem

[This message has been edited by Lakewalker (edited 08-10-2000).]

ellie LeJeune
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since 2000-01-10

Posts 4156
King of Prussia, PA USA

3 posted 2000-08-10 10:58 PM

Wonderful masterpiece of praise. ellie

Alle'cram
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since 2000-02-28

Posts 1816
Texas

4 posted 2000-08-10 11:04 PM

All earth shall know Him
As we look upon His Face
God's Kingdom revealed.

Welcome Stephanos, enjoyed your thoughts much and added my thoughts to yours. marcy

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