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ellie LeJeune
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since 2000-01-10
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0 posted 2000-08-10 05:49 PM


Summer sun goes down
Brightness of God's Love is seen
in moon light and stars



Summers haunting melody
that awakens
the butterflies,
calling them to join
the dance
in their silent song
of praise to God.

eL

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Lakewalker
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1 posted 2000-08-10 08:13 PM


Another great picture placed in my mind.  These really are thoughts to cherish.
BSC
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2 posted 2000-08-10 10:02 PM


My favorite time of the day...watching His wonders fill the heavens.  Another beauty Ellie.  Bonnie
Stephanos
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3 posted 2000-08-10 10:24 PM


Very Eloquent.   This reminds me of Psalm 139 which says
"Indeed darkness shall not hide from you.  But the night shines as the day.
The darkness and the light are both alike to you (Oh God)".

Alle'cram
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since 2000-02-28
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Texas
4 posted 2000-08-10 10:52 PM


in smiles of children
His brightness gives light to all
who seek shall find Him.


good job, I just tried to pick up and  follow yours. His love, His brightness! amen

Denise
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5 posted 2000-08-10 10:53 PM


Beautiful, Ellie!  
Denise

WhtDove
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6 posted 2000-08-12 11:27 AM


Ellie this is a great Haiku!

Color bursts in sky
Picturesque scene just for you
Because I love you


They're so fun aren't they?

Dennis L. White
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since 2000-02-17
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Michigan, U.S.A.
7 posted 2000-08-13 11:37 AM


Sis,

God love's evident
His pure light shines in our hearts
Even through the night

Your verse illuminates Gods' love for us!
Dennis :^)

deleeme
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since 1999-10-09
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NEW ENGLAND, USA
8 posted 2000-08-14 05:00 AM


Glowing Finale
Orange with God's perfect Love
Telling us Good Night!

Ellie, your spiritual Haikus are simply glorious- reflect the glory that is from above!   David

"GOD GIVES- but man must open his hand." (German Proverb)


juliet_2u
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since 2000-07-23
Posts 1125
North Carolina
9 posted 2000-08-14 03:16 PM


Truly lovely Ellie.
Juls

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