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ellie LeJeune
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since 2000-01-10
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King of Prussia, PA USA

0 posted 2000-08-10 05:41 PM


sun is high above
God sends a breeze neath this tree
to cool me with love


Summers haunting melody
that awakens
the butterflies,
calling them to join
the dance
in their silent song
of praise to God.

eL

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Lakewalker
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since 2000-08-05
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On the streets w/ people
1 posted 2000-08-10 08:11 PM


Another relaxing thought, can't wait to check out the evening
BSC
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2 posted 2000-08-10 09:58 PM


Oh Ellie, Could anything be more refreshing?? This is wonderful, so utterly serene.  Bonnie
Stephanos
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3 posted 2000-08-10 10:33 PM


Allusion perhaps to Eden where God was walking in the cool of the day?

Cool is "Ruach" (Hebrew) meaning literally spirit, or breeze.

Enjoyed this much!

Alle'cram
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since 2000-02-28
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4 posted 2000-08-10 10:44 PM


ellie, good one and I liked very much. So serene, so just like our Lord.  
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