Guardian Angel - The answer to my challenge . . .

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Lone Wolf
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since 2000-03-16

Posts 5842
Lansing, MI USA

0 posted 2000-07-27 10:46 PM

I feel her next to me
Clearing a path so I can see
Sent down from heaven above
An angel full of God's love
Her mission is to impart
Strength and wisdom on my heart
To help me see the light
On even the darkest of nights

Her presence warms my soul
To her I surrender control
With grace she sets me free
The Lord had heard my plea
Forgiving all past wrong and sin
Allowing my heart to be pure again
I will follow where He leads
Learning from His miraculous deeds

Never alone when she is around
Her voice produces a musical sound
An angel in every sense of the word
Whispering until her message is heard
I hear her loud and crystal clear
Soothing my deepest darkest fear
She carries out God's will
With the most meticulous skill

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Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats

BSC

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Member Elite

since 2000-02-04

Posts 2919
New York, USA

1 posted 2000-07-28 07:54 AM

LW - Wow, great way to meet your challenge. Such a lovely poem, and I like the way you show how you your Guardian Angel is around you. Just wonderful. Bonnie

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ellie LeJeune
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since 2000-01-10

Posts 4156
King of Prussia, PA USA

2 posted 2000-07-28 08:08 AM

Positively heavenly! ellie

Summers haunting melody
that awakens
the butterflies,
calling them to join
the dance
in their silent song
of praise to God.

eL

Sudhir Iyer
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since 2000-04-26

Posts 6943
Mumbai, India : now in Belgium

3 posted 2000-07-28 08:36 AM

Heavenly indeed...

Lone Wolf,
this is a definite setting of high standards for your own challenge...

regards,
sudhir

juliet_2u
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since 2000-07-23

Posts 1125
North Carolina

4 posted 2000-07-28 11:00 AM

Lone Wolf, very lovely. Best wishes, Juls

Poet deVine

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-26

Posts 22612
Hurricane Alley

5 posted 2000-07-28 09:30 PM

Wonderfully done! Challenge met I think. Isn't this fun!

Sunshine

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Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

6 posted 2000-07-28 10:50 PM

Ah this is good...I like it...

Sunny

~~~Keep your face to the sunshine and you cannot see the shadow.
Helen Keller ~~~

When you want to be loved, look within...KRJ

StarrGazer
Senior Member

since 2000-03-05

Posts 679
Texas

7 posted 2000-07-29 12:32 PM

Thsi is great ... way to meet your own challenge

deleeme
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since 1999-10-09

Posts 1766
NEW ENGLAND, USA

8 posted 2000-07-29 07:33 AM

This is descriptively lovely and wonderful that you are willing to participate in your own challenge. David

LoveAll
Member

since 2000-05-24

Posts 148
B'dale, USA

9 posted 2000-07-30 05:22 PM

I love it! It is heavenly itself. Wonderful job!

"Of all those arts in which the wise excel,
Nature's chief masterpiece is writing well."
~Essay on Poetry, John Sheffield

"Those who trust in the Lord will renew their strength. They will soar on wings like eagles; run and not grow weary, walk and not be faint."
~Isaiah 40:3

WhtDove
Member Rara Avis

since 1999-07-22

Posts 9245
Illinois

10 posted 2000-07-30 05:28 PM

This was a wonderful read! I'd say you met your own challenge just great!

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