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Lighthousebob
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since 2000-06-14
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0 posted 2000-07-21 12:44 PM



Desert Weed

Planted in desert sand
as a meek and lowly seed
rooted in tumult soil,
none knew that God would lead
a sprouting stalk so humble
to make desolation heed.
Not with piercing thorn nor bramble,
but in the light of a bruised reed
grew an orchid incognito
disguised as an ugly weed.

Alone in wind swept land
as the weed hung drooping head
submerged in climate's toil,
none knew that God had said
a stone who's causing stumble
would resurrect from the dead.
Not with urgent crawl nor scramble,
but in Spirit by whom was led
an ugly weed to bloom an orchid
from a desert flower bed.

-Robert E. Michaud Jr.-

© Copyright 2000 Robert E. Michaud Jr. - All Rights Reserved
Rex
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since 2000-06-29
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1 posted 2000-07-21 12:48 PM


Very very nice Lighthousebob!  My kind of poetry--enjoyed it very much.

Poetry is the spontaneous overflow of powerful feelings: it takes its origin from emotion recollected in tranquility.

-William Wordsworth-

Sunshine
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2 posted 2000-07-21 01:34 PM


This is very good! I was a pain in a lot of Kansans' sides when I first came here and commented on the beauty of those "tall purple flowers" and "small white flowers that look like miniature morning glories" ... if you've ever been through here, you know I'm talking about noxious muskthistle and bindweed! Now, I'm off to find an orchid in a weed...

Sunny

~~~Keep your face to the sunshine and you cannot see the shadow.
Helen Keller ~~~

When you want to be loved, look within...KRJ



deleeme
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since 1999-10-09
Posts 1766
NEW ENGLAND, USA
3 posted 2000-07-21 05:02 PM


Bob,
Your poem here is very pictureque and strriking.  It rather reminds me of the prophetic description of the Christ as the suffering servant, as found in Isa. 53. as without form or comeliness a root out of dry ground- (v.2). Yet as the ending of that grewat passage predicts he in his faithfulness becomes that altogether lovely redeemer ,sin-bearer,and divine interecssor.
__Lovely poem-lovely thoughts,Bob
         Thank you,  David

"GOD GIVES- but man must open his hand." (German Proverb)


ellie LeJeune
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since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156
King of Prussia, PA USA
4 posted 2000-07-21 05:06 PM


Bob; what a wondeful poem. God's wonders never cease. Ellie

Summers haunting melody
that awakens
the butterflies,
calling them to join
the dance
in their silent song
of praise to God.

eL

BSC
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since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919
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5 posted 2000-07-21 06:16 PM


Bob- I love those "weeds" - This is simply a beautiful piece, wonderfully written.  Bonnie
Lighthousebob
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6 posted 2000-07-23 12:23 PM


Rex,

Being a novice writer, I am honored that you enjoyed my poem very much... Thank you.

Sunshine,

No... I have never been to Kansas, but thank you for humoring me...those muskthistles and bindweeds sound beautiful in bloom.

deleeme,

You amaze me!!!  How you picked the exact scripture that inspired me to write this poem...  I love that scripture and I was reading it while I wrote.  You got the real meaning of my poem...  (Isiah 53:1-5)

elle LeJeune,

Yes, we serve a wonder working Creator.

Thank you,

Bob <><


sandgrain
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since 1999-09-21
Posts 3662
Sycamore, IL, USA
7 posted 2000-07-23 06:13 PM


Thank you for sharing this beauty.  Even the noxous weeds have beauty if we look close enough.  Jesus was unrecognized then and it seems sadly, yet today.
WhtDove
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since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245
Illinois
8 posted 2000-07-24 10:46 AM


Bob a very meaningful poem! In more than one way. Done with excellence!
Lynne Dale
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since 2000-07-18
Posts 114
Melbourne Victoria
9 posted 2000-07-25 09:01 AM


Bob this is a lovely image. I will never look at a weed in the same way.

kethry.
When dark of night takes your soul
Think of me and be made whole.

chaplainscott
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since 2000-07-25
Posts 10
Hot Springs, Arkansas
10 posted 2000-07-26 05:33 AM


Bob,
It is in lowly earthen vessels he chose to dwell,and to expound his treasures. You have taken a lowly,common thing and made it into a thing of eternal beauty!
Brovo! Excellent piece!
chaplainscott http://www.chaplainscott.com

L Tiuch
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since 2000-02-04
Posts 151
NY
11 posted 2000-07-26 05:09 PM


Bob...it's hard to come up with something new to say, so will just echo all that has been said before me.  Very nice!  Linda
juliet_2u
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since 2000-07-23
Posts 1125
North Carolina
12 posted 2000-07-26 07:40 PM


Bob isn't it incredible how God takes the things that seems like nothing and turns them inot things of beauty. Like us for instance. The poem says it all. Loved it. Take care, Juls
Lighthousebob
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since 2000-06-14
Posts 4725
California
13 posted 2000-07-27 03:01 PM


BSC,

Thank you for your agreeing that those "weeds" are lovable.  Sometimes we can only see the outside and not see the "orchid" (Risen Christ) living in those we come in contact.

a sandgrain,

What a lovely name...  Sad, but true we do not always recognize Jesus in the obscure, but He does reside in the simple things... Like a grain of sand.  Lovely name.

WhtDove,

I am pleased that you found meaning and versatility in this writing... I am honored by your positive observation.

Lynne Dale,

I am glad to have widened your perception a bit and Welcome to Passions.

chaplainscott,

I am so happy that He has chosen to dwell in lowly earthen vessels such as myself.... Thank you for your most reverent comments and also Welcome.

L Tiuch,

I accept that echo and receive it as a double portion...  Thank you.

Juliet_2U,

You have made a very notable point, and yes it is incredible for certain.

Bob <><



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