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Lynne Dale
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since 2000-07-18
Posts 114
Melbourne Victoria

0 posted 2000-07-20 09:15 PM


You touch me in the morning with wind upon your wings,
and I can sense the power of your greater things
You offer me true comfort and lift me up on high
I know that when I'm with you together we can fly.

You offer me the promise of better things to come.
a leaving of my failings,  standing closer to the son.
You give to me a part of you that makes my spirit soar
I rise with you, my soul forgot and dreary nevermore

You touch me in the sunlight, I often catch a glimpse
of your greater journey, where you cavort with nymphs
and lift them to a higher plane, as you do with me
Where loving and a touch of hope always sets them free.

You give me sanctuary, a respite from my care
with you I go, willingly so, anywhere.
You give promise of tomorrow, a surcease from my past,
I touch you only seldom for angels can't be grasped.

You touch me in the evening when twilight lingers on
your guise of peace brings to me, the echo of a song
and I will rise up hopeful forever proud to be
a part of you that rests in hope and in eternity.

An angel doesn't make love but is love, this I know
to bring the shower of greatest love to all who dwell below
So this my joy, my comfort, a pledge to let you go
Wind to your wing is what I sing may it be always so.



kethry.
When dark of night takes your soul
Think of me and be made whole.

© Copyright 2000 Lynne Dale - All Rights Reserved
BSC
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since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919
New York, USA
1 posted 2000-07-20 09:21 PM


Oh Lynne, This is so beautiful.  I shall read this over and over, it's such a loving, peaceful poem, just full of inspiration.  Bonnie
deleeme
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since 1999-10-09
Posts 1766
NEW ENGLAND, USA
2 posted 2000-07-20 09:47 PM


Lynne,  what a wonderfully serene and inspiring poem which you share with us here-flowing in a very melodic way itself.  Very good!   David

"GOD GIVES- but man must open his hand." (German Proverb)


ellie LeJeune
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since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156
King of Prussia, PA USA
3 posted 2000-07-20 10:10 PM


Lynne: This is so lovely and beautifully written. I could feel the heavenly peace as I read each line. Wonderful! Ellie< !signature-->

Summers haunting melody
that awakens
the butterflies,
calling them to join
the dance
in their silent song
of praise to God.  
    
eL


[This message has been edited by ellie LeJeune (edited 07-20-2000).]

WhtDove
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245
Illinois
4 posted 2000-07-21 09:48 AM


Welcome!
This was a very serene, calming poem. Beautifully written!

Rex
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since 2000-06-29
Posts 482
Houston, Texas
5 posted 2000-07-21 11:09 AM


Lovely, very lovely indeed.  Soft and serene.
Enjoyed it very much.  Welcome to Passions.


Poetry is the spontaneous overflow of powerful feelings: it takes its origin from emotion recollected in tranquility.

-William Wordsworth-

Lighthousebob
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since 2000-06-14
Posts 4725
California
6 posted 2000-07-21 01:12 PM


You have a divine angel who watches over you and your soul... Lovely, lovely poem.

Bob <><

sandgrain
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since 1999-09-21
Posts 3662
Sycamore, IL, USA
7 posted 2000-07-23 05:34 PM


Beautifully written!  Certainly does convey the delight and serenity of an angels presence.
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