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BSC
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0 posted 2000-07-12 06:12 PM


Majestic mountains standing guard,
Clouds gathering at their peaks,
Reflecting on the mirrored lake;
This must be a place where He speaks.
From the valley that passes through them,
Mist rises to meet the sky,
A rainbow of glistening, opaque rays,
Gone in the blink of an eye.
In the narrow opening,
With a mountain on each side,
Stands Our Lord Almighty,
Arms spread and opened wide.
Behind Him shimmering waterfalls,
Cascading down the hill,
Gracefully, doves are soaring,
As He is standing still.
The sleeves of His white robe billow,
As He shows this magnificent sight,
Embracing His beauty in nature,
As He shines His glorious light.
I stared in awesome wonder,
And gazed upon His face,
As Our Lord stood in this valley,
And blessed me with His grace.


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Alle'cram
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since 2000-02-28
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1 posted 2000-07-12 06:28 PM


Oh my, my Bonnie, I have no words to say how this made me feel. I can visual the scene that you gloriously brushed with your pen.
I find no words qualifying for the beauty of this poem. Absolutely breathtaking.

Sunshine
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2 posted 2000-07-12 07:06 PM


quote:


Majestic mountains standing guard,
Clouds gathering at their peaks,
Reflecting on the mirrored lake;
This must be a place where He speaks.


Awesome!

Sunny

~~~Keep your face to the sunshine and you cannot see the shadow.
Helen Keller ~~~

When you want to be loved, look within...KRJ


ellie LeJeune
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3 posted 2000-07-12 08:29 PM


A poem as only our sweet Bonnie can write. Awesome and wondrous! Love, Ellie

Summers haunting melody
that awakens
the butterflies,
calling them to join
the dance
in their silent song
of praise to God.

ell

Lighthousebob
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since 2000-06-14
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4 posted 2000-07-13 05:00 PM


By this your poetic picture, you have filled my mind with phenomenal imagery....   Bob <><
sandgrain
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5 posted 2000-07-13 06:39 PM


What a way you have with words! Fantastic imagery in a wonderful piece.
WhtDove
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since 1999-07-22
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6 posted 2000-07-14 11:21 AM


Bonnie some day I hope to see what fills your visions and gives you this awesome inspiration. I know it is the Lord! But you must have some fantastic imagery outside or within to write like this?!!  
YeshuJah Malikk
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7 posted 2000-07-15 04:16 AM


The heavens declare the glory of JAH and the firmament showeth HIS handy works... I never cease to bow my spirit at HIS feet as I daily behold the works of HIS hand.  This poem took me there.  Ain't it awe inspiring?
Thanks for painting this word picture.

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