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Elizabeth Santos
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since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269
Pennsylvania

0 posted 2000-07-08 03:58 PM


Where is God When We Need Him?

God wields a powerful sword in our lives
There’s purpose and reason in all he contrives
And the strength of his presence brings questions to bear
In the hour of sorrow he seems unaware

Where does God dwell when our need is most dire?
Our prayers seem wrapped up in a shrouded attire
Unseen and unheard as we plod through the day
Without God beside us, we make our own way

Through sorrow and heartache we drearily plod
Unanswered our prayers, and forsaken by God
But one day in the future the truth will be shown
That we could not have weathered the storm all alone

And then looking back at the victories we’d won
And how we accomplished all we had done
The strength of our spirit brings questions to bear
He had always been with us, we were just unaware

He is with us in sorrow, in beauty, in love
He dwells in our hearts and in heaven above
He lives in the fields where the whippoorwill sings
He’s heard in the swishing of cardinal wings

He’s obviously there in the oceans great roar
And in every splendor we’ve witnessed before
We see Him in a rosebud with droplets of rain
But we don’t recognize Him when we are in pain

Elizabeth Santos

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ellie LeJeune
Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156
King of Prussia, PA USA
1 posted 2000-07-08 04:46 PM


Liz; This is a beautiful poem. I think that when we are in our deepest pain and sorrow,
that is when He is so close and weeping with
us and feeling our pain, that we can't feel His presence. Love, Ellie

Summers haunting melody
that awakens
the butterflies,
calling them to join
the dance
in their silent song
of praise to God.

ellie LeJeune


WhtDove
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since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245
Illinois
2 posted 2000-07-08 11:02 PM


Liz this is so truthful! This is just stunning work here! You're poetry is all excellent, but this one is especially touching!

I hope you'll consider this for book material?

Lighthousebob
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since 2000-06-14
Posts 4725
California
3 posted 2000-07-09 12:55 PM


Yes, Isn't He faithful to be there right when you need Him?  He is as close as the mentioning of His name...  Bob <><
Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354
Listening to every heart
4 posted 2000-07-09 08:22 AM


Ah Elizabeth, when the pain is that intense, he is there, holding us, keeping us from breaking...and his robe dries our tears...

Sunny

~~~Keep your face to the sunshine and you cannot see the shadow.
Helen Keller ~~~

When you want to be loved, look within...KRJ


Alle'cram
Senior Member
since 2000-02-28
Posts 1816
Texas
5 posted 2000-07-10 12:22 PM


Oh Liz, this is so beautiful. With this lovely poem you have run the full course, from questioning, in times of sorrow, to a realization that He is always, always with us. I love this! Marcy
Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648

6 posted 2000-07-11 10:21 PM


Wonderful, wonderful poem, Elizabeth. Great writing and expression of faith.

Denise

BSC
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since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919
New York, USA
7 posted 2000-07-12 09:19 AM


Oh Liz, How beautifully you have asked and answered the questions.  A truly lovely way to remind us that we need only remember that He is always there.  Bonnie
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