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Rex
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since 2000-06-29
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0 posted 2000-07-08 12:28 PM


By placid blue-green waters
A snow-white heron stands.
His silhouette against the sun--
His shadow on the sands.
And wafted on a quiet breeze,
That sweeps the summer by,
A lone white feather flutters
Like the whisper of a sigh!
When the dusk bedims his outline
And heralds the coming night,
He will scatter his dreams about him
And spread his wings in flight.



© Copyright 2000 Rex E. Alford - All Rights Reserved
ellie LeJeune
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since 2000-01-10
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1 posted 2000-07-08 01:31 PM


Wow, Rex: This is one exquisite poem, perfect in rhyme and form. It flows like the subject in flight. You are so very gifted!
Ellie

Summers haunting melody
that awakens
the butterflies,
calling them to join
the dance
in their silent song
of praise to God.

ellie LeJeune


Sunshine
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2 posted 2000-07-08 01:43 PM


I know this heron, he is a friend
soft the invisible wind he bends
in flight graceful, in stance supreme
his grace to me I would he, lend...

wonderful, Rex, a true insight to God's gifts, beauty that be ours to enjoy...


Sunny

~~~Keep your face to the sunshine and you cannot see the shadow.
Helen Keller ~~~

When you want to be loved, look within...KRJ


Elizabeth Santos
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since 1999-11-08
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3 posted 2000-07-08 03:55 PM


I love your poetry
Liz

Lighthousebob
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4 posted 2000-07-10 01:58 AM


a very peaceful and dreamy verse to bid me good night...  Bob <><
Denise
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5 posted 2000-07-11 10:24 PM


Wow! Absolutely beautiful!

Denise

BSC
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6 posted 2000-07-12 09:08 AM


Oh what a beautiful picture your pen has painted.  This is wonderful Rex.   Bonnie
Alle'cram
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since 2000-02-28
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7 posted 2000-07-12 10:10 AM


Rex, Simply lovely. Breathtaking! loved it.
WhtDove
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8 posted 2000-07-14 10:56 AM


Excellence! Just excellence!
YeshuJah Malikk
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since 2000-06-29
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9 posted 2000-07-15 04:26 AM


I've been a witness to this scene a thousand times, and must say that you have captured almost all of what I felt in a few words.  Sweet.  Thanks
Songbird
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10 posted 2000-07-15 07:56 PM


This poem is for the birds!! I love it!! I love birds of all kinds!!
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