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Lost Dreamer
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since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464
Somewhere near the Rainbow

0 posted 2000-06-30 09:10 PM


God is Here with Me

Freezing in distance
trying to cope
seeing where to turn

God is here with me
as Satan stabs
and tries to wound

I'm building a wall
for protection
praying it's strong

I try so hard to see
as his blindness
drives him around

Left to fight the battle
God as my guide
holding together my mind

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BSC
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since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919
New York, USA
1 posted 2000-06-30 09:20 PM


And glad we are that He is there to guide you.  Sounds like where I've been in the not too distant past. Your heart is right out there in this one LD.  Beautifully written.  Bonnie

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deleeme
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since 1999-10-09
Posts 1766
NEW ENGLAND, USA
2 posted 2000-07-01 07:54 AM


Lost Dreamer,
  Your poem touchingly tells of the spiritual conflict that we all must face in our lives. Thank od for a God who is there for us- and loves us, and guides us, and protects us, and accepts us.  "If God be for us who can be agaionst us?"
           Wonderful message,  
                   David

ellie LeJeune
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since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156
King of Prussia, PA USA
3 posted 2000-07-01 12:57 PM


A dear friend once told me to give up the battle and leave it all to God to fight. I did, and it was soon over, once I let go.
Your poem is wonderful. I want to thank you for you wonderful reply to my Authorian poem in the pub...next installment tomorrow!
Love, Ellie

Summers haunting melody
that awakens
the butterflies,
calling them to join
the dance
in their silent song
of praise to God.

ellie LeJeune


Dennis L. White
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since 2000-02-17
Posts 1463
Michigan, U.S.A.
4 posted 2000-07-01 02:09 PM


Lost Dreamer,
  You sound like a FOUND Dreamer to me! I liked this poem a lot!
Dennis :^)

Lost Dreamer
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since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464
Somewhere near the Rainbow
5 posted 2000-07-01 03:12 PM


My thanks to all of you, I needed to write this poem to bring God's strength to the forefront of my mind.
Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354
Listening to every heart
6 posted 2000-07-02 08:14 AM


Then this poem, LD, must have comforted you quite a bit...thank you so much for sharing it with us...

Sunny

~~~Keep your face to the sunshine and you cannot see the shadow.
Helen Keller ~~~

When you want to be loved, look within...KRJ


WhtDove
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245
Illinois
7 posted 2000-07-03 10:35 PM


I know I was stuck in this rut for a while. Try not to build that wall if you can help it. For God is your protecting wall!  This was so very well written Gloria!
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