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BSC
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0 posted 2000-06-27 10:36 AM


How precious the little angel
That waits outside for me,
Downy, delicate feathers,
On wings that are so wee.
Chestnut curls surround her face,
Her eyes an emerald green,
Dimples in her chubby cheeks,
A rosebud mouth, serene.
Her peaches and cream complexion,
Matches her little robe,
In her hands she's holding,
A mystical looking globe.
She beckons me to come closer,
And take a little peek,
What I saw in that mirrored ball,
Made my legs feel weak.
I saw a scene with Our Father,
Sitting in a heavenly glade,
Surrounded by little children,
Explaining the beauty He's made.
First a lop-eared bunny,
Then a pure white baby dove,
A mother deer with two little fawns,
All created with His love.
He pointed out the sunshine,
The flowers, grass and trees,
He even told them all the whys,
Of butterflies and bees.
I heard the daintiest giggle,
And saw the cherub's smile,
As she revealed the secrets,
That make this life worthwhile.





[This message has been edited by BSC (edited 06-27-2000).]

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Sunshine
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1 posted 2000-06-27 11:48 AM


Oh there are many, many reasons why this will be one of my favorites...so well done, so uplifting, so precious!

Sunny

~~~Keep your face to the sunshine and you cannot see the shadow.
Helen Keller ~~~

When you want to be loved, look within...KRJ


MagnoliaBlue
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2 posted 2000-06-27 12:25 PM


I agree!

I love this....very sweet
and precious!

Thanks a bunch for the
great read.  

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LoveBug
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3 posted 2000-06-27 02:35 PM


This is a beautiful piece, my friend. True, children seem to be the ones that possess this insight.

"We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars." -Oscar Wilde
"The robbed that smiles steals something from the thief" -Shakespea

ellie LeJeune
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4 posted 2000-06-27 05:47 PM


Dearest Bonnie; I love the childlike heart that you have to be able to write with such wonder and enchantment. I'm coming to your house soon, where all the little Angels live!
Love, Ellie

Summers haunting melody
that awakens
the butterflies,
calling them to join
the dance
in their silent song
of praise to God.

ellie LeJeune


WhtDove
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5 posted 2000-06-27 08:49 PM


Bonnie and it's just like those wee ones to be attentive enough to listen. I love this! Once again, your imagery takes us to an enchanted place. One I'd like to visit. I guess I just need to close my eyes huh? Block out this worldly stuff? hehe

Beautiful Bonnie, but I've come to expect nothing less  

Songbird
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6 posted 2000-06-27 10:02 PM


Delightful, a poem I would never get tired of reading..
jfreak
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7 posted 2000-06-28 02:55 AM


Outstanding use of imagery.  I just love the complete detailed description.  Breathtaking.

J~

Alle'cram
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since 2000-02-28
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8 posted 2000-06-28 10:29 AM


Precious and beautiful. Innocence of a child.
Enjoyed this much.

monte
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9 posted 2000-06-29 05:35 PM


Another angle poem, your talent truly is god given. Keep writing, I will keep reading....
Lighthousebob
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10 posted 2000-06-30 12:07 PM


I love this precious poem.  I've already sent copies as a card to my family and friends.  The poem matches perfectly with the pictures of child angels that are available. Thank you for sharing your wonderful talent.

Bob <><

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