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ellie LeJeune
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since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156
King of Prussia, PA USA

0 posted 2000-06-26 06:33 PM


Come to Me
My passions sweet.
My flowering garden
of desires,
that blossoms with
scented perfume,
and fills my senses
with fragrance
of nectars honey
that lures the
butterflies
to taste the fullness
of loves deep wanting.

Come and be My beloved.
Run with Me through
meadows of salvation,
and we shall be one
beside the flowing streams,
lost in passions oneness.
Where I will hold your
heart so tenderly in Mine,
and you will feel
the kiss of My Spirit
setting you free.
A kiss to deepen our
love,
to depths and heights
that fill to overflowing.
Radiating love like
sunbeams
that will light the
narrow way,
dispelling the darkness,
light that brings My
lost ones home to Me.


Summers haunting melody
that awakens
the butterflies,
calling them to join
the dance
in their silent song
of praise to God.

ellie LeJeune


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Lighthousebob
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since 2000-06-14
Posts 4725
California
1 posted 2000-06-26 08:07 PM


While reading your poem, I felt the Spirit's call to come away.  Much like the Song of Solomon.  A wonderful escape into God's Love.

Bob <><

BSC
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since 2000-02-04
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2 posted 2000-06-26 09:26 PM


Oh Ellie this is so very beautiful, and so tender.  I love every single line.  Bonnie
deleeme
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since 1999-10-09
Posts 1766
NEW ENGLAND, USA
3 posted 2000-06-26 09:34 PM


Dear Ellie,
To me, there is nothing more beautiful than spiritual romanticism.  Needless to say, I was awed and wooed by this beautiful poem.What lovely touches of loving Grace it has!

Well done!
                    David


"GOD GIVES- but man must open his hand." (German Proverb)


Alle'cram
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since 2000-02-28
Posts 1816
Texas
4 posted 2000-06-27 12:19 PM


Dear Ellie,
   Heavenly inspired and beautifully written.
Oh, the sweetess of your spirit conveyed in poem.

Dennis L. White
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since 2000-02-17
Posts 1463
Michigan, U.S.A.
5 posted 2000-06-27 08:55 AM


Sister Ellie,
   What a beautiful, pure love poem with such vivid imagery written with an evident tenderness! Your praise poetry is fantastic! I was transported to this wonderful place through your sweet words. WOW
Dennis :^)

Silkdragon
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since 2000-06-24
Posts 65

6 posted 2000-06-27 02:53 PM


:shivers :
Wow, I really liked this poem.  Very touching.  I'm really impressed.  Keep it up!
    

Erin

[This message has been edited by Silkdragon (edited 06-27-2000).]

LoveBug
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7 posted 2000-06-27 04:03 PM


This is a beautiful description of God's love for all of us. Thank you for sharing it with us!

"We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars." -Oscar Wilde
"The robbed that smiles steals something from the thief" -Shakespea

ellie LeJeune
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since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156
King of Prussia, PA USA
8 posted 2000-06-29 06:10 AM


Thank you all for your replies...My heart is touched always when I know my words and poems touch yours... E
WhtDove
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since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245
Illinois
9 posted 2000-06-29 10:03 AM


Ellie, this is romantic, and so much more. Beauty in it's purest form!  

I loves these lines here...

Radiating love like
sunbeams
that will light the
narrow way,
dispelling the darkness,
light that brings My
lost ones home to Me.


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