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Lost Dreamer
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since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464
Somewhere near the Rainbow

0 posted 2000-06-23 06:55 AM


Together

I'll share with you my vision of hope
if together we can refract darkness
I'll share with you my realm of sound
if together we can silence the screams
I'll share with you my voice of reason
if together we can reach lost souls in need
I'll share with you my arms outstretched
if together we can carry away the pain
I'll share with you my knowledge of life
if together we can make a difference

Together sharing our resources can be rewarding,
when with hope we reach out to make life better.
God's eternal love will always be a guiding force.

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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354
Listening to every heart
1 posted 2000-06-23 06:59 AM


Your first lines remind me of a prism nestled in cotton swath...this is a caring, beautiful poem...thank you!

Sunshine

~~~Keep your face to the sunshine and you cannot see the shadow.
Helen Keller ~~~


ellie LeJeune
Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156
King of Prussia, PA USA
2 posted 2000-06-23 07:47 AM


We are nothing apart from Him, and each other. I love your thoughts here that we need each other to make a difference. Lovely!
Ellie

Summers haunting melody
that awakens
the butterflies,
calling them to join
the dance
in their silent song
of praise to God.

ellie LeJeune


Alle'cram
Senior Member
since 2000-02-28
Posts 1816
Texas
3 posted 2000-06-23 02:45 PM


Hi Lost Dreamer,
  A beautifully written poem calling for unity, to make a difference and help others. I enjoyed this very much.

Lighthousebob
Member Elite
since 2000-06-14
Posts 4725
California
4 posted 2000-06-23 08:56 PM


We can do all things through Christ;

I'll share with you my arms oustretched
if together we can carry away the pain

is a perfect portrayal of working together with Him.

Bob <><

douglasbailey
Junior Member
since 2000-06-23
Posts 27
Palmerston North, New Zealand
5 posted 2000-06-23 10:18 PM


Wow...United we stand.

We will touch the untouchable,
Reach the unreachable,
Love the unloveable,
Yes Lord!

Thanks for sharing that.
Douglas

deleeme
Senior Member
since 1999-10-09
Posts 1766
NEW ENGLAND, USA
6 posted 2000-06-23 10:45 PM


Lost Dreamer-
  I hope this is not just a dream-- but a vison for good for the present & toward a brighter future.  Thank you for this lovely & powerful vision for our lives--may we each & together go forth to see that it is fulfilled.  Amen   David

Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648

7 posted 2000-06-24 08:25 PM


Beautiful vision, Gloria!  

Denise

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