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WhtDove
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0 posted 2000-06-21 12:27 PM


My precious Lord, let your Spirit flow
Bring to our soul, the joy we should know
May You give warmth and beauty inside
Release the darkness and ugly pride

Let the bubbling of joy, overwhelm
Bring us back to the spiritual realm
Where once again we live by Your will
Knowing by faith, our needs you'll fulfill

May You, be the center of our lives
The only One, on which our soul thrives
Though we may live in the world today
Lead our minds in a spiritual way

Help us give hearts a happier place
In sharing with them, Your loving grace
Help us view others, as through Your eyes
Help us to love them, not to despise

May WE, Father, let Your spirit flow
Teaching others what they might not know
May all know joy and peace from Love
The kind that only comes from above




[This message has been edited by WhtDove (edited 06-23-2000).]

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Sunshine
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1 posted 2000-06-21 01:40 PM


Very nice! {~,^}

Sunshine

~~~Keep your face to the sunshine and you cannot see the shadow.
Helen Keller ~~~


Poet deVine
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2 posted 2000-06-21 02:31 PM


Beautiful Becky! I like..  
BSC
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3 posted 2000-06-21 06:42 PM


Just beautiful Rebecca.  A prayer I shall read often and remember well.  Thanks so much for the e-mail you sent, that poem was so helpful, I truly appreciated it.  Bonnie
ellie LeJeune
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4 posted 2000-06-21 07:17 PM


Beck; I can't begin to tell you how much I neede these peaceful words today. Beautiful poem, thank you! Love, Ellie

Summers haunting melody
that awakens
the butterflies,
calling them to join
the dance
in their silent song
of praise to God.

ellie LeJeune


Lighthousebob
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5 posted 2000-06-21 07:36 PM


White Dove,

What a touching prayer and there is no better place to be... than praying.

Bob <><

PhaerieChild
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6 posted 2000-06-22 03:48 PM


'Becca...waht a beautiful prayer. It was sorely needed today. Thank you so much. (((((HUGS TO YOU)))))))

Poetry~ Words falling on paper, painting a dream.

Shawna R. Holder
Boise, Idaho



Denise
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7 posted 2000-06-22 09:09 PM


Beautiful, Rebecca! Very inspiring!  

Denise

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8 posted 2000-06-22 10:54 PM


Rebecca, This is so inspirational, I love it.
jfreak
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9 posted 2000-06-23 06:11 AM


Becca,

YOu should write for a greeting card company.  Very good poem.  Yes...very insprirational.

J~

WhtDove
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10 posted 2000-06-23 09:06 AM


Thank you all!

Shawna glad it could help and many big hugs back at ya!  

Brandon, you're just too kind LOL!
Thank you for such a sweet compliment!

Songbird
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11 posted 2000-06-23 09:36 AM


Book material I would say without a doubt!!
Alle'cram
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12 posted 2000-06-23 03:17 PM


Very spiritual and moving. Oh, to have heavenly desires above earthly desires then will our eyes more clearly see. Beautifully written.
Nicole
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13 posted 2000-06-24 02:00 AM


Inspiring...This is just wonderful, I loved it!

WhtDove
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14 posted 2000-06-25 11:27 AM


Septsong, Marcy, and Satiate, thank you so much!
sandgrain
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15 posted 2000-06-25 05:54 PM


Sure is a beauty in every way!  What we ought all ask daily to keep our lives on track.  I'm so thankful for you, dear Daughter, bringing so much to others through your writing.
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16 posted 2000-06-25 07:38 PM


WhiteDove~
Lovely and inspirational.
~*Marge*~


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Mike
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17 posted 2000-06-26 03:06 PM


Beautifully written and expressed.
deleeme
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18 posted 2000-06-26 10:15 PM


Becky,
I would not want top contradict anything that is said so far but say to you_ bless you girl- for this lovely submissive poetic prayer!  This is the way to pray--All I can say is amen!  David


"GOD GIVES- but man must open his hand." (German Proverb)


WhtDove
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since 1999-07-22
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Illinois
19 posted 2000-06-26 11:51 PM


Mom thank you, I never quite view it that way, but if it helps one soul, then my goal is accomplished!

Marge thank you!

Mike I appreciate that much  

David, is there something you would like to contradict?  Thank you David, for such heartfelt words, they mean a lot they do!


Dark Angel
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20 posted 2000-06-27 02:36 AM


Lovely Angel Dove  

Yes, I am here, but I am dead, not alive,
my body goes on, my spirit has died,
and I though alive, feel dead inside.

"Rose Petal"


WhtDove
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21 posted 2000-07-08 10:45 PM


Thank you DA!  
BSC
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22 posted 2004-12-07 09:13 PM


Amen Becky ~ You filled me with inspiration so long ago ~~ when I first read this~~ you still do, in so many ways!!! All of us here know your beautiful heart and how well you know the love of God.  Please know that candles are lit, and prayers are constantly going up for you.  Bonnie
Poet deVine
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23 posted 2004-12-07 09:45 PM


Amen.
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24 posted 2004-12-15 03:19 PM


Bless you but also know that you have been the source to many a soul needing comfort, and now we all wish that same peace and joy come back on you.

Amen

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