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FlyHigh
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since 2000-06-21
Posts 84
Bekkestua, Norway

0 posted 2000-06-21 05:12 AM


five suns

the smile that radiates so much bliss
that slowly heals a soul on fire
and boosts the feeling of being missed
forever increasing the highest desire

the smile that swoops down to take me away
that let's me bask in the glare forever
the warmth to save a sodden stray
as if I could be without it, no never



[This message has been edited by FlyHigh (edited 06-21-2000).]

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ellie LeJeune
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since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156
King of Prussia, PA USA
1 posted 2000-06-21 07:56 AM


"forever increasing the highest desire" This is wonderful. Welcome! I look forward to seeing more. Ellie< !signature-->

Summers haunting melody
that awakens
the butterflies,
calling them to join
the dance
in their silent song
of praise to God.  
    
ellie LeJeune



[This message has been edited by ellie LeJeune (edited 06-21-2000).]

BSC
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since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919
New York, USA
2 posted 2000-06-21 08:23 AM


What a wonderful poem, terrific entrance. Bonnie
FlyHigh
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since 2000-06-21
Posts 84
Bekkestua, Norway
3 posted 2000-06-21 09:41 AM


Gee, thanks..  *blush*

Not used to praise.. =)

WhtDove
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245
Illinois
4 posted 2000-06-21 11:07 AM


Welcome! Those smiles can do an awful lot can't they? Lift your spirit, warm your soul.  You've said a lot with few words!  
Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354
Listening to every heart
5 posted 2000-06-21 11:35 AM


Welcome to Passions.  Very nice work...

Sunshine

~~~Keep your face to the sunshine and you cannot see the shadow.
Helen Keller ~~~


Lighthousebob
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since 2000-06-14
Posts 4725
California
6 posted 2000-06-21 02:39 PM


You've brought to my mind a loved one's smile who brings sunshine into my life.

Thank you,

Bob <><

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