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Lighthousebob
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since 2000-06-14
Posts 4725
California

0 posted 2000-06-16 01:46 PM


IN NINE LONG

After your transplant surgery
You'll have a N.G. tube up your nose
And out of your urinary tract
Will extrude a long hose.
You'll have a tube in your neck
For I.V. solutions to enter
And two J.P. drains
To drain your new insulin center.
You'll sort through the emotions
Which continue to loom
As your being transported by gurney
Back to your room...
In Nine Long.
Nine Long is a hospital ward
Overlooking San Francisco Bay.
The windows at night are draped
With a fog of vast gray.
Busy halls become quiet
As recovering patients aspire
To reach a deep healing
From their professional hire.
Each nurse reaches in to touch
A part of your soul
And before very long
You'll be feeling quite whole...
In Nine Long.
Rejection drugs, infection drugs,
And drugs to help you rest.
Out of all the drugs, personally,
I liked the morphine the best.
Have faith, drink plenty of liquids,
Educate yourself, get out of your bed,
And try your best to remember
What the physicians have said.
Far beyond all the disciplines, the pain,
The anxieties, and the strife;
You'll receive the greatest gift of all,
You'll receive a new life...
In Nine Long.

-Robert E. Michaud Jr.-


© Copyright 2000 Robert E. Michaud Jr. - All Rights Reserved
Alle'cram
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since 2000-02-28
Posts 1816
Texas
1 posted 2000-06-16 02:00 PM


I loved this and your humor is shinning through!! Very good read.    Marcy
Dennis L. White
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since 2000-02-17
Posts 1463
Michigan, U.S.A.
2 posted 2000-06-16 02:36 PM


Robert,
  What a bizare and probably acurate picture you paint, But life is precious and we often go to extrodinary measures to cling to it and prolong it. Just one observation, life without purpose is of little value. Great read! Dennis :^)

Sunshine
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3 posted 2000-06-16 03:17 PM


I had to giggle at this because I was recently hospitalized and while "I liked the Morphine best" works for you, I had an allergic reaction and anything was better than that!

Having faith also worked for me...

 Sunshine

~~~Keep your face to the sunshine and you cannot see the shadow.
Helen Keller ~~~


ellie LeJeune
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since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156
King of Prussia, PA USA
4 posted 2000-06-16 06:51 PM


Dear Bob; I'm more concerned about how you are doing? Are you ok now? Faith is always the answer and I like the way you have put this poetically so well.
Ellie

 Summers haunting melody
that awakens
the butterflies,
calling them to join
the dance
in their silent song
of praise to God.

ellie LeJeune


BSC
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since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919
New York, USA
5 posted 2000-06-17 05:16 PM


Bob -In a poetically perfect and humorous way you have shown what this scary experience is like.  And, I too hope all is well now.  Bonnie
Lighthousebob
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since 2000-06-14
Posts 4725
California
6 posted 2000-06-17 07:10 PM


Thank you everyone for your comments, concerns, and recognition.

Marcy: During extended stays in a hospital, humor certainly comes in handy.

Dennis: True. Since my release, I have tried to fill my life with purpose.

Sunshine: At times, Faith is all we have.  Not necesarily faith in a miraculous healing.
But, Faith that no matter what happens, God is always present.

Ellie and Bonnie: Not to worry, I have been given a new life.  Like receiving a spiritual
new birth, I have received a physical new birth.

Bob <><

WhtDove
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245
Illinois
7 posted 2000-06-17 10:24 PM


Bob, I sure read a lot of thankfulness in this. The chance to be whole again. To take the bull by the horns. God is moving in your life and your poetry. May He always continue to do so!
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