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ellie LeJeune
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since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156
King of Prussia, PA USA

0 posted 2000-06-14 08:46 PM


Does she dance
to the melody
because her heart
is alive
with the joy
of being Yours?
Does she need
a partner
that could be
any sweeter
than the One
who holds her
with tender Arms
that surround her
heart and soul?
An embrace that
will deepen with
time, endless time
that brings fullness
and oneness
to the eternal dance
of loves melody.


 Summers haunting melody that awakens the butterflies, calling them to join the dance in their silent song of praise to God. E LeJeune


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BSC
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since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919
New York, USA
1 posted 2000-06-14 08:56 PM


Oh Ellie - What a warm and wonderful dance.  This is breathtaking, just so soothing - dancing "the eternal dance of loves melody."
Wow....I'll dream of this dance tonight.  Bonnie

Alle'cram
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since 2000-02-28
Posts 1816
Texas
2 posted 2000-06-14 09:34 PM


ellie, Your so spiritually guided with your poetry. Your heart is so pure and filled with the Lord, your poems so uplifting.

"that brings fullness and oneness"

The joy in loving and serving Jesus truly adds music to this poem. Blessings, Marcy

deleeme
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since 1999-10-09
Posts 1766
NEW ENGLAND, USA
3 posted 2000-06-14 10:07 PM


Ellie,
this is a beautiful Spiritual Romance poem the flows just as grascefully as Ginger Rogers and Fred Aistaire--very nice!  David

Dennis L. White
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since 2000-02-17
Posts 1463
Michigan, U.S.A.
4 posted 2000-06-15 06:45 AM


Sis,
  This is so sweet and melodic, your words flow with such grace. WOW!
BRO Dennis :^)

 Moonbeams radiate
When the veiling cloud has past
Playful shadows dance

Dennis L. White :^)

WhtDove
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245
Illinois
5 posted 2000-06-15 12:28 PM


Ellie how can I describe this? Calm, serene, magical, beautiful! Eternal dance, of which I can hear the sweet music playing softly in the background. Well done  
brian madden
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since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374
ireland
6 posted 2000-06-15 05:04 PM


a wonderful poem, makes me want to dance as well. lovely.

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"Take nothing but pictures. Leave nothing but footprints. Kill nothing but time".

Baltimore Grotto

"To be nobody-but-yourself-in a world which is doing its best night and day, to make you everybody else - means to fight the hardest battle which any human being can fight; and never stop fighting."

E.E Cummings.

"Art is a lie which makes us realise the truth." Pablo Picasso

"We Irish are too poetical to be poets, we are a nation of brilliant failures" Oscar Wilde


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Tramp Poet
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since 2000-01-06
Posts 754
Could Be Anywhere...
7 posted 2000-06-15 11:52 PM


the very essence of love captured...
and more importantly the Love that
knows no bounds...
thank you,
D


  bleeding...

"Tis ink coming
from his arm,
Captain!"



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