navwin » Archives » Spiritual Journeys » New Romanticism
Spiritual Journeys
Post A Reply Post New Topic New Romanticism Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
brian madden
Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374
ireland

0 posted 2000-06-14 06:11 PM




I’ve awoken from a disturbed sleep
into a day I am not ready for.
A new dawn crawls into my room
guiding me in a half finished dream
down the stairs where I sit
and converse softly with family.

My back window, dull in condensation,
is wiped clean for a view of a quiet motorway.
The greens and parks abandoned sit happily
with their bland stone neighbours, under
a heavy sky with grey clouds crawling.
Ushered on, I see today with a beautiful smile.

Wash my tired eyes, standing in slumber
too exhausted to be proud, wrapped in humble
beginnings I am at peace with my surround.
The sky reflects my heart,
its breath was drawn clean from infancy;
I found the new romanticism that has always been



 ------------------------
"Take nothing but pictures. Leave nothing but footprints. Kill nothing but time".

Baltimore Grotto

"To be nobody-but-yourself-in a world which is doing its best night and day, to make you everybody else - means to fight the hardest battle which any human being can fight; and never stop fighting."

E.E Cummings.

"Art is a lie which makes us realise the truth." Pablo Picasso

"You do not destroy an idea by killing people; you replace it with a better one". Edward Keating



-----





© Copyright 2000 brian madden - All Rights Reserved
ellie LeJeune
Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156
King of Prussia, PA USA
1 posted 2000-06-14 06:17 PM


"I am at peace with my surround". You've really said so much here that is full of simple joys and yet there is so much wisdom in your poem. Thanks, Brian, I needed the peaceful feeling you've given me in these lovely words. Ellie

 02



Alle'cram
Senior Member
since 2000-02-28
Posts 1816
Texas
2 posted 2000-06-14 07:46 PM


Hi Bryan, I loved this.

"My back window, dull in condensation,
is wiped clean for a view of a quiet motorway."

Just a lovely way to remind us, get on with it! Really, really enjoyed this one.
Blessings and thanks,
Marcy

WhtDove
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245
Illinois
3 posted 2000-06-15 12:32 PM


The imagery you used gives a clear picture.
The peace that flows from this poem is just wonderful!

Lighthousebob
Member Elite
since 2000-06-14
Posts 4725
California
4 posted 2000-06-15 02:17 PM


I love your intricacy of facing a brand new day.  The mundane begets a new vision on life...

Bob <><

Post A Reply Post New Topic ⇧ top of page ⇧ Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.
navwin » Archives » Spiritual Journeys » New Romanticism

Passions in Poetry | pipTalk Home Page | Main Poetry Forums | 100 Best Poems

How to Join | Member's Area / Help | Private Library | Search | Contact Us | Login
Discussion | Tech Talk | Archives | Sanctuary