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zorkon65
Junior Member
since 2000-04-22
Posts 27


0 posted 2000-06-12 07:46 PM


What do I do?
By charlie herring

These feelings are new
To strong to be a crush
And to soon to be love
God guide my foot steps
Let me walk in your plan
Give me answers
To my prayers
In your time and will
Let this be something
Truly founded in you
Apart from sin and hurt
Let love be the answer
And "am I in" be the quistion
Walk in love while
Walking in the light
She is a godsend
No other explantion
But still I am fearful
I never asked for this
She came out of the blue
She came from heaven
I know its true


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 work like you don't need the money,
dance like no one's watching, and
love like you've never been hurt


[This message has been edited by zorkon65 (edited 06-12-2000).]

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Allstaria22
Member
since 2000-06-11
Posts 83
MN USA
1 posted 2000-06-12 09:43 PM


I loved this poem, I think it says everything that I fear when I look in to the face of the man I love. It is great that you realize that God is in control. I hope that, if this was about you, everything is working out for the best. can't wait to read more of your stuff.

Dana

 Isaiah 1:18
"Everyone loves a rose, will you be thankful for the thorns?"

Alle'cram
Senior Member
since 2000-02-28
Posts 1816
Texas
2 posted 2000-06-12 10:54 PM


Hi zorkon,
  Very good job in poem conveying thoughts.
Just a reminder, when you ask of God, don't be surprised if He sends you a answer. amen.

St.Matthew 7:7;"Ask, and it shall be given you; seek, and ye shall find; knock, and it shall be opened unto you."

St.Matthew 6:33;"But seek ye first the kingdom of God, and his righteousness; and all these things shall be added unto you."

Blessings,
Marcy

ellie LeJeune
Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156
King of Prussia, PA USA
3 posted 2000-06-13 01:35 AM


dear Zorkon; very beautiful! You are seeking His  will and that's all He asks, now just trust in Hin. Romans 8:28 "All things turn to good for those who trust the Lord" Ellie

 02



WhtDove
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245
Illinois
4 posted 2000-06-14 11:18 AM


This is wonderful! When God leads us, and gives a true love for a gift, then we know it's right! In His will first, then all things will fall in place. Excellent poem!
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