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Rodney Belcher
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since 2000-06-06
Posts 227
Taylor, Michigan

0 posted 2000-06-09 05:31 PM


I look around me at the land of my ancestors

A land blessed by the creator
with beauty and resources beyond compare
The earth was respected and cherished
Now it is raped and abused by the uncaring  

My people lived in harmony with nature and Mother Earth
till the selfish man came and wanted to
possess what he could not
-our earth, our land, our soul


Although we are but a few today,
he has not truly won
For my ancestors vanquished by greed,
live within me today

Their blood runs through my veins
Their presence is in my memory
And their souls are on the wind

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 Love one another-let God do the worrying,
Rodney


[This message has been edited by Rodney Belcher (edited 06-09-2000).]

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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354
Listening to every heart
1 posted 2000-06-09 06:13 PM


You will become a very well-known person here, especially if you team up with Marge! She is one who will very much appreciate your thoughts and process of them into poetic form.  Please look for her in Open Forum 7, she is there daily.

Your piece here is quite well done...simple, eloquent and spiritual.

Thank you.

 Sunshine

~~~Keep your face to the sunshine and you cannot see the shadow.
Helen Keller ~~~


ellie LeJeune
Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156
King of Prussia, PA USA
2 posted 2000-06-09 10:33 PM


Rodney; Beautiful! I love the way you honor your people in this poetic way, so they should have always been honored, for they were in tune with the earth and would have honored and preserved it better than it has been. Thank you, Ellie

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Alle'cram
Senior Member
since 2000-02-28
Posts 1816
Texas
3 posted 2000-06-09 11:28 PM


Rodney, I really enjoyed this poem. A lovely reminder to cherish and remain true to the beauty around us, created by God. Thank you.
WhtDove
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245
Illinois
4 posted 2000-06-10 12:30 PM


The first person this brought to mind is Marge. She's dedicated a site to just this.
It is sad how it's become abused by the selfishness of people. I don't want to go on a rant here so I won't.

I loved your poem! And I always admired learning about how others lived with the earth and such. Took care of it, and respected it. Wonderful tribute!

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