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Honeybee
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0 posted 2000-06-02 07:46 PM




~GOD'S PAINTING HAIKU~

5-7-5

The sunset golden
paints the sky brilliant copper
God's beauty revealed

*By Melissa Honeybee*

© Copyright 2000 Melissa P. Long-Monette - All Rights Reserved
Sunshine
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1 posted 2000-06-02 10:15 PM


When you do it right, you do it very right!  Well done, Melissa!

 Sunshine

~~~Keep your face to the sunshine and you cannot see the shadow.
Helen Keller ~~~


ellie LeJeune
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2 posted 2000-06-03 03:18 AM


Melissa; Absolutely perfect in the simple lovely truth! Ellie

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Alle'cram
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3 posted 2000-06-03 08:08 AM


Melissa, What a perfect scene you give us.
Thank-you.  marcy

Honeybee
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4 posted 2000-06-03 06:13 PM



Thank you so much for reading and replying to my haiku!  I love to see the world as God's painting and I like to see the rain as God's tears of joy because God has a hand in everything, anything can be beautiful if you try to see it through God.

Take care,
Melissa Honeybee

brian madden
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5 posted 2000-06-03 07:17 PM


beautiful, keep those haikus coming.

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"I've been too honest with myself I should have lied like everybody else"-Richey Edwards

"Take nothing but pictures. Leave nothing but footprints. Kill nothing but time".

Baltimore Grotto

"Libraries gave us power
Then work came and made us free
What price now for a shallow piece of dignity"
Nicky Wire, A design for Life.

manic street preachers
"Rock 'n' roll is our epiphany
Culture, alienation, boredom and despair"

WhtDove
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6 posted 2000-06-04 11:44 PM


Nicely done! I'm surprised Marge hasn't seen this one yet. She does these all the time  
Dennis L. White
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since 2000-02-17
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7 posted 2000-06-05 10:12 AM


Melissa H,
  The heavens declare the glory of GOD and the firmement showeth his handiwork (Psalms 19:1)! YES, we are blest by the beauty that God surronds us with! Your haiku is a beautiful reflection of GOD! Keep up the great haikus! Dennis :^)

 Moonbeams radiate
When the veiling cloud has past
Playful shadows dance

Dennis L. White :^)

Marge Tindal
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8 posted 2000-06-07 02:54 AM


Melissa~
Look at you !
Tucked away in a corner of my heart.
Love, love, love ... these thoughts.

Here's one written especially for you ...

Little Honeybee
Buzzing sweet sincerity
God is watching thee

~*Marge*~




 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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deleeme
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9 posted 2000-06-08 07:24 PM


I have recently come into greater appreciation of the haiku's--so I can appreciate this one much more- and the glorious portrait of God's natural masterpieces that you are sharing.
                David

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