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Elizabeth Santos
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since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269
Pennsylvania

0 posted 2000-06-02 04:03 AM


Dust to Dust

Ash to ash and dust to dust
That’s what the Bible said
There’s someone dying or arriving
Underneath my bed

It’s funny how our kids interpret
What we try to teach
The obvious becomes obscure
To little minds we reach

I well recall the misconceptions
Born in childhood
Repeating those familiar words
I never understood

I thought trespasses were a crime
They said it was a sin
Why did Jesus emphasize
The act of breaking in

I thought that psalms were fan shaped leaves
From off a coconut tree
And that “The quicker the dead” you are
The better off you’d be

“Hark thee, Harold” we would sing
And sing it just because
I never knew what “hark thee” meant
Or who this Harold was

“God rest ye married gentlemen
Let nothing you display”
I sang with all my little heart
In church on Christmas day

“We three kings of Orientar”
A place not known on earth
Brought to the little baby Jesus
“In cents, golden worth”

What splendor from the mouths of babes
The world has always known
But we had fun with little
Innuendoes of our own

What did the mother skunk say
To her family in distress
We’d giggle when the preacher
Answered it with humbleness

A childhood joke invoking smiles
Still sticks with me today
Every time I here the famous supplication
“Let us spray”

Elizabeth Santos

© Copyright 2000 Elizabeth Santos - All Rights Reserved
netswan
Senior Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 1369
Washington
1 posted 2000-06-02 04:42 AM


Wonderful poem   - well written and full
of wit.  I sometimes envy those that
believe in the biblical God - oh how
much easier it would be for me.

Spent years searching, became a reverend
in my learning and still cannot believe
in such as he.

But love you poem!

~netswan

Elizabeth Santos
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since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269
Pennsylvania
2 posted 2000-06-02 05:04 AM


Netswan,
I know what you mean, I had a hard time with that also until events changed my life. I don't have much Bible learning, but a lot of
what I believe was learned the hard way, not from books or Sunday school. My convictions are impossible to funnel into any one "denomination" But I do know one thing. sometimes we don't find the answers to questions because the answers are so obvious that we don't think to look there. That is why I wrote a poem once about why we ask the why of things, delving into the past, into the stars, into the inner reaches of the mind, when the answer is "in a sparrow's sing". Just stop and listen. There He is.
Liz

netswan
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since 2000-03-28
Posts 1369
Washington
3 posted 2000-06-02 05:18 AM


Thank you Liz --- I understand. I know
so many that have found the bible and
are so content and happy in life. I am
envious _OOPS a sin  --*smile*

I have studied the bible tons as was not
raised with God ---my grandmother the most
wonderful person I ever knew - was a Christian Scientist - lived a life full
of love and goodness.  

I got in a religious
discussion and some Zealot said Grandma's
church was a cult and she would be burning
in hell right now.  I was shocked and of course very angry -------as I said, never
met a more loving unhypocritical person in
my life -----and after that fell into deep
lathargy and STUDIED with a vengeance ---
and have found that GOD is in one's heart.

Thanks for commenting on my poem in here.
Sorry  hehe am very moody tonight doing
some heavy soul searching -)
the Reverend Teresa King, dd  who no longer
preaches in a community church.

~netswan

ellie LeJeune
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since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156
King of Prussia, PA USA
4 posted 2000-06-02 07:03 AM


Dear Liz; This lovely poem was so much fun to read. Light and sweet and full packed with wisdom and childlike wonder! Thanks for the lift today, Liz. Love, Ellie

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BSC
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since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919
New York, USA
5 posted 2000-06-02 08:40 AM


Liz - This is soooo cute, brought back some great memories of myself and my boys.  What a great way to start the day.....Bonnie
Sunshine
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Posts 63354
Listening to every heart
6 posted 2000-06-02 10:03 PM


This brought back many memories...especially when I had friends with lisps...and me with a stutter...

 Sunshine

~~~Keep your face to the sunshine and you cannot see the shadow.
Helen Keller ~~~


brian madden
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since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374
ireland
7 posted 2000-06-03 07:21 PM


a wonderful poem, very cute, brings back memories of fumbling over words in mass. aw the innocence of children.

 ------------------------
"I've been too honest with myself I should have lied like everybody else"-Richey Edwards

"Take nothing but pictures. Leave nothing but footprints. Kill nothing but time".

Baltimore Grotto

"Libraries gave us power
Then work came and made us free
What price now for a shallow piece of dignity"
Nicky Wire, A design for Life.

manic street preachers
"Rock 'n' roll is our epiphany
Culture, alienation, boredom and despair"

Alle'cram
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since 2000-02-28
Posts 1816
Texas
8 posted 2000-06-03 11:19 PM


Liz, boy you brought back some good/bad memories with your talents in this one. I was corrected, (so many times) "I thought that psalms were fan shaped leaves"...me too! "I thought trespasses were a crime", lol
I really, really like this, it made me happy to reflect.  Bless you mightly. marcy

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9 posted 2000-06-04 09:18 AM


Oh, Liz~
My goodness ... you crack me up !
This is just a wonderful Sunday morning treat.  Exactly what I needed to put a big smile in my heart.

'Ash to ash and dust to dust
That’s what the Bible said
There’s someone dying or arriving
Underneath my bed'

*And mine looks like a cemetery ready for ribbon-cutting ceremonies !  
Love you, gal.
~*Marge*~


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com


WhtDove
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since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245
Illinois
10 posted 2000-06-05 11:09 AM


LOL Liz! How many wrong concepts we have as kids. I get a kick out of this one, especially the 'spray.'  I never heard that before! Thank you for this, and for the smiles.
deleeme
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since 1999-10-09
Posts 1766
NEW ENGLAND, USA
11 posted 2000-06-05 11:14 AM


Liz,
  This is so adorable and lighthearted --it really made my day!!!  Thank you so much for this treasure.  David


 "GOD GIVES- but man must open his hand." (German Proverb)


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