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Ardonida
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since 2000-05-18
Posts 76


0 posted 2000-05-23 12:20 PM


Thanks to everyone for the warm welcome and the good thoughts on my work.
So let me bore you with another one. HEY YOU asked!!  
A.

When I look at the moon..
One nite I looked up, and I saw the moon,
I just kept on looking, and a face apeared soon.
I stared at this face, knowing every line,
and ittook me while to realise it's mine!!
I looked at my face, all high up in the sky,
and I remember that I once asked my place in the world, by a spell of scry!!
I then realised like so many lessons to learn,
that each and every person has a place in the world, and no matter how high,
That thru the moon, you can see yourself thru your very own eye'...
I looked and I looked and I thought and thought,
But to no avail, I could find ansers..naught.
Then suddenly a cloud came by, and my face in the moon became ever so shy...
For then once again, I realised that there is no vail,
even if you try to hide it life anywhere is very frail.
I realised standing there just looking at myself,
That everything I am, I had to work hard,
and deep inside myself I had to delve.
I earned my place high up in the sky,
And that was what was revealed to me, doing my spell of skry!!
I leave you now, to go look at the moon,
And think of your life, and wait for your face to apear there as well, soon.
And I ask of you when a cloud moves by,to realy look hard,and let the vail drop down, so you can learn,
That in everyday life, you are what you earn,
And before you can get high up in the sky,
You have to look, listen and learn!!


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WhtDove
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245
Illinois
1 posted 2000-05-23 10:52 AM


Oops, sorry about that!

[This message has been edited by WhtDove (edited 05-23-2000).]

WhtDove
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245
Illinois
2 posted 2000-05-23 10:53 AM


Life is very frail isn't it?  In the Bible it states we are here but for moment.
Your poem is very true to life. We are what we make of ourselves!  A lot of thought here to ponder on.

I have one question if you would care to expound on it.  I don't understand what this is...spell of skry

I haven't heard of that before, would you be so kind as to explain it for me?


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God does have a sense humor. Just take a look at the platypus!

Ardonida
Member
since 2000-05-18
Posts 76

3 posted 2000-05-23 03:56 PM


hey there love,
Dove, you asked what a spell of skry is, well it is a pagan term for "finding out about your past or future."
In the terms that I used it, it is like looking inside yourself to find out who you are.(Upon doing this spell, you can get answers to questions, kinda like crystall balls revealing things)
I hope this helps  
A.

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