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ROSE MARY
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since 2000-04-09
Posts 82
scranton,pa. u.s.a

0 posted 2000-05-20 01:36 PM


THE JOURNEY OF A TEAR DROP

I am a warm salty tear drop
that has journeyed far and wide
I started in the body of a woman
whose husband had just said"goodbye"

She cooked a lovely dinner this day
lit candles to dine by
but sitting there at the empty table
is where she closed her eyes and cried

I ran down her trembling cheek
onto her quievering hand
that held the note she recieved
from this uncaring cold man

The silence of this woman's sorrow
as she looked over the table decor
touching everything with anguish pain
for what she would share no more

What a reflection I saw
as I laid there upon that hand
a woman's heart broken to pieces
for she had so much love for this man

As she picked up the picture
that sat next to the candle lit
I rolled from her hand onto it's frame
of three beautiful children I must admit

As I ran down the glass
she spoke in such a sad way
what will I tell my daughters
when they say "where is daddy today"

She drew the picture to her heart
and thats where I came to rest
soaked through her blouse into her soul
what a journey I must attest

I came from a well of tear drops
that only knew true joy and happiness
but somehow I got mixed up
and landed in the well of the depressed

Before I was so happy
to be a tear drop felt
for I came about out of love
the kind that could make your heart melt

But I don't want to be the tear drop
that is shed from hurt and pain
for the journey that it takes you through
is one that can drive you insane

So next time you feel a tear drop
from pain and sorrow upon your face
brush me away quickly
for I long to be replaced

Let me be the tear drop
where joy and happiness abounds
the tear drop shed in the joy of love
is where I want to be found

written by
rose mary(c) 5/20/2000
sadie 1030


 

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ellie LeJeune
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since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156
King of Prussia, PA USA
1 posted 2000-05-20 01:52 PM


exquisite poem, Rose Mary. So very sad though. I like the concept of the tear talking in the first person. Great job. Ellie

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Alle'cram
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since 2000-02-28
Posts 1816
Texas
2 posted 2000-05-20 02:50 PM


Rose Marie, Very lovely. I like the poem from the tear's point of view. Good work!marcy
Marge Tindal
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3 posted 2000-05-21 03:27 PM


RoseMary~

A
soft
tear falls
never knowing
the journey on
which it might
be going


A
tear
of joy
might be
sent to rest
in a soul where
sorrow is sent
to caress


A
tear
to grow
and someday
rest on eyelash
of much intended
happiness found
in a heart of
much joy
~*~

Beautiful thoughts you've shared
with your journey of the tear.
~*Marge*~




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Kavika
Junior Member
since 2000-05-06
Posts 35
Wyoming
4 posted 2000-05-21 06:34 PM


oh dear this is just a wonderful poem!  Describes a story so sad so well, and ends in a terrific way.  Every word, and every tear drop are just beautiful!

God bless you!

Grandma Amy

 ``Some have learnt many Tricks of sly Evasion, Instead of Truth they use Equivocation, And eke it out with mental Reservation, Which is to good Men an Abomination. ''

- Benjamin Franklin

deleeme
Senior Member
since 1999-10-09
Posts 1766
NEW ENGLAND, USA
5 posted 2000-05-22 10:01 PM


You're words are said and moving, as the teardrop in this very feeling poem.   David
WhtDove
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245
Illinois
6 posted 2000-05-25 10:12 AM


Interesting perspective of a tear drop! Sad, and moving it is.  You've given me a whole different way of looking at it.

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God does have a sense humor. Just take a look at the platypus!

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