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Cyndol Claycamp
Junior Member
since 2000-05-17
Posts 12


0 posted 2000-05-17 10:27 AM


A Wonderful world

A word is written a story told.
A music note put down a dance danced.
A bolt today becomes a machine today.
A minute passes a page written.
A night goes bye leaving one sleep deprived.
A seed planted a plant born.
Oh wos a wonderful world.
A clay wheel spun pottery made.
A child born a future made.
A circle spun it's just begun.
A line made a picture drawn.
A vow given a lasting relationship made.
Oh wos a wonderful world.
A minute goes by and I stay true to you,
FOR THERE IS ONLY ONE GOD OF MINE.

© Copyright 2000 Cyndol Claycamp - All Rights Reserved
WhtDove
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245
Illinois
1 posted 2000-05-17 11:05 AM


WELCOME!  I love how simple the words are, but the meaning comes across crystal clear!  This is some fine work.

I hope you find a place here, we'd love to see more of your works.

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Alle'cram
Senior Member
since 2000-02-28
Posts 1816
Texas
2 posted 2000-05-17 01:03 PM


Welcome Cyndol,
    Yes, it is a "Wonderful World", just as your beautiful poem describes. Good job,marcy

ellie LeJeune
Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156
King of Prussia, PA USA
3 posted 2000-05-17 03:36 PM


WELCOME, Cyndol, this is a wonderful poem and I'm so glad you have joined us here. We are a great bunch who will encourage and appreciate you and your writing. Ellie

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BSC
Moderator
Member Elite
since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919
New York, USA
4 posted 2000-05-18 08:19 AM


Hi Cyndol - What a beautiful way to simply describe our wonderful world.  Nice job.  Bonnie
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