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Alle'cram
Senior Member
since 2000-02-28
Posts 1816
Texas

0 posted 2000-05-07 02:14 PM


Ben' doin' a little thanken
bout some stuff, thats' going on.
now who's to say what's right or wrong
about a dat-gone song?

some like a little country
a toe-tap sort of thang,
we aint a talkin "Chopin",

Woah! stop, don't be confussed!!
Oh, me !
the dancers gettin' ready
to do a four by four,
when "Chopin, " starts a playin'

oh me!

a classical delight,
( "Fantaisie Impromptu"),

the boys in duh boots
standin' round a bout,
fixen' to do some mopen
with the boys on duh floor!

Chubby enters in
as duh brawl a breaken out
thinking he's invited to a twist and shout

Deleeme gave directions, said "come on"
dinners served,
with a little Mozart
to soothe all of our nerves

now, some  like to dance,
some jest come  to eat
deleeme blessed the dinner
the food was really neat

Chopin got acquainted
with a verse of Maybelline
and we all wuz a clappin
to the very same theme.

inspired by ellie:


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Alle'cram
Senior Member
since 2000-02-28
Posts 1816
Texas
1 posted 2000-05-07 02:21 PM


I'm going away now, will return in a week or so! Oh, me, do you ever get this silly? Oh me, I did post it!!!!!yelp, its still there all right. I am shuting down now. mm
ellie LeJeune
Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156
King of Prussia, PA USA
2 posted 2000-05-07 03:38 PM


Marcy; Yoy posted it!!!! David will be hysterical! We gotta be silly, it's food for the the soul. Jesus said " my burden is light". He probably wants us all to lighten up a bit. This was great! Terrific and LOL!!!
Love, Ellie< !signature-->

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[This message has been edited by ellie LeJeune (edited 05-07-2000).]

deleeme
Senior Member
since 1999-10-09
Posts 1766
NEW ENGLAND, USA
3 posted 2000-05-07 10:32 PM


Yahoo!  What a Classy Shindig,  and thanks to you Marcy, I get to be right in with them, A little bit away ,thankfully, from the the brawl that's a brewing--and My wife liked yore suthern accent, Too!

Like the say, a little levity, leaveneth the whole lump!!  Thanks for the laughs!!!
             David(aka deleeme)

sandgrain
Member Elite
since 1999-09-21
Posts 3662
Sycamore, IL, USA
4 posted 2000-05-07 10:44 PM


This one was a surprise.  We all need to loosen up and get on the lighter side every now and then.  Thanks for sharing it and your comment, David, added to the good laugh.  
KimW
Member
since 2000-03-04
Posts 268
Medford, Oregon, USA
5 posted 2000-05-07 11:26 PM


Alle, Ellie and David !! *Grin!!*
What a wonderful laugh and light poem to waltz (oops! sorry.. bad pun) back in to!  

I have missed you all and I am enjoying catching up and reading what you have posted!!

Kim

Tramp Poet
Senior Member
since 2000-01-06
Posts 754
Could Be Anywhere...
6 posted 2000-05-08 12:16 PM


gasp, shock, unbelievable...
did my dear sister let her hair down???
Again sis, i think you are cute in that shade of pink!  
thanks for the stomp!
excuse me as i retreat back to the pub...

blushing...ah shucks no it's


  bleeding...

"Tis ink coming from his arm,
Captain!"


WhtDove
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245
Illinois
7 posted 2000-05-08 12:20 PM


Marcy thanks for the chuckle! What do you think of moving this to the Open forum Marcy so everyone can enjoy it?
Let me know!

[This message has been edited by WhtDove (edited 05-08-2000).]

BSC
Moderator
Member Elite
since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919
New York, USA
8 posted 2000-05-09 07:43 AM


Hehehehe Marcy --- Ya gotta love this 'un.... Ya done real good....Thanks fer the chuckle.  Bonnie

[This message has been edited by BSC (edited 05-09-2000).]

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