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Lost Dreamer
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since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464
Somewhere near the Rainbow

0 posted 2000-05-06 03:40 PM


Divineness

Starlight castles built so high
makes my spirit want to fly.
Cross the hemisphere of time
as I hear the church bells chime

Warm mysterious plateau
sounds of serenity flow.
The grace of our father's plan
faith through him a trusted clan.

Rings of love surrounding hearts
one with him sharing imparts.
Golden smiles flood the land
where ocean swells gather sand.

With ocean strength our souls strive
gathering hands thoughts survive.
Grayish tones turned to brightness
in honor of divineness

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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648

1 posted 2000-05-06 10:15 PM


He does turn those grays to brightness, doesn't He?! This is beautiful, Gloria!

Denise

deleeme
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since 1999-10-09
Posts 1766
NEW ENGLAND, USA
2 posted 2000-05-07 12:07 PM


Gloria,
  This is a "Glorious" picture of Praise, as expressed in the comming together to share together as with one mouth & Heart unto the Glory of the Divine.  What a beautiful expression of Praise you voice here, Thank You,  David


 "GOD GIVES- but man must open his hand." (German Proverb)


Alle'cram
Senior Member
since 2000-02-28
Posts 1816
Texas
3 posted 2000-05-07 01:26 AM


Dear Lost Dreamer,
  You have captured something so spiritual. You have captured love offerings to our Savior, being filled with His love as one shares with another, soon His love is freely flowing to all. What a wonderful poem. marcy

WhtDove
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245
Illinois
4 posted 2000-05-08 10:25 AM


Gloria I'm glad to see you back again  
I love what you've done here! He does make grayer brighter...You've captured it well!

sandgrain
Member Elite
since 1999-09-21
Posts 3662
Sycamore, IL, USA
5 posted 2000-05-08 05:25 PM


Your metaphors and analogies are so beautifully portrayed in praising verse.  I love your writings.
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