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Forrest Cain
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since 2000-04-21
Posts 306
Chas.,W.V. USA

0 posted 2000-05-05 03:21 AM


Clouds

  beyond a grasp
          upon the wind
                  splashed white
                          against the sky
   a closer glimpse
              of Godly dreams
                        it makes me want
                                   to cry.

forrest
1977

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Jester59701
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since 2000-02-29
Posts 154

1 posted 2000-05-05 04:21 AM


Beautiful Forrest!
I like the way your mind works, I love the way your heart feels. Excellent!
                Jester

[This message has been edited by Jester59701 (edited 05-05-2000).]

ellie LeJeune
Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156
King of Prussia, PA USA
2 posted 2000-05-05 05:50 AM


The beautiful simplicity of your poem is delightful! Always with an inspiring message.
Ellie

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sandgrain
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since 1999-09-21
Posts 3662
Sycamore, IL, USA
3 posted 2000-05-05 09:47 AM


Love it!  So well you've painted the picture of how very moving God's everyday gifts can be.  I find with age, I cry more from joy than from hurts, or maybe age isn't the factor as much as a more profound realization.
WhtDove
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245
Illinois
4 posted 2000-05-05 09:53 AM


Forrest I love your work! You have one mighty talent to be able to make such profound statements in so few words!

This brings back flying in a plane. The clouds when you get a different perspective from being above them. Not sure why, but it made me feel closer to God when I was among them...as this poem did also! Thank you so much  

Alle'cram
Senior Member
since 2000-02-28
Posts 1816
Texas
5 posted 2000-05-05 04:59 PM


Great Forrest, sometimes we feel we can almost touch em'!! Bless you, Marcy
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