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UndyingLove Junior Member
since 2000-04-24
Posts 23Bethany, OK, USA |
I Looked to Him I wrestled in the dark Looking for a simple ray of light I had to get my life Out of the depths of night But where could I go To keep from sinking low? I looked to Him The One who set the stars in place I looked to Him The One who called my name When I needed a hand And when I wanted to run I looked to Him I remember a time When all I could see was the end I felt so alone So in need of a friend But what could I find To give me peace of mind? I looked to Him The One who set the stars in place I looked to Him The One who called my name When I needed a hand And when I wanted to run I looked to Him Please note: this is a song I wrote, not just a poem. Please let me know what you think, and if you think it portrays a good witness. Thank you. "Goodnight, sweet prince, and flights of angels guide thee to thy rest." -William Shakespeare, in "Hamlet" |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Amy~ This is absolutely lovely. It portrays a lovely witness to Him. Your talent is blessed. We are so pleased to have you here to share your testament to His love. *EVERYONE ... CHECK OUT THIS YOUNG LADY'S HOME PAGE Bless you. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA |
this is a beautiful song, I just wish I could hear the music that goes with it. I just know that it must be as lovely as the words. keep singing your own sweet song here for us all to here. Ellie 02 |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Welcome! This is a beautiful song, and when I read it, I read it as such! I think it gives a wonderful message! <*\\\>< When you can't make up your mind, Which way is right for you, Stop and softly ask yourself, "What Would Jesus Do?" |
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deleeme Senior Member
since 1999-10-09
Posts 1766NEW ENGLAND, USA |
Ity is a great song indeed, with a great theme--Looking to Jesus the Creator-Sustainer & Finisher of Our Faith! This is a Good message--yet it be heard! Sing on!!! David |
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son of man Member
since 2000-04-25
Posts 125 |
i thought as i was reading this poem, "this would make such a lovely song." do you have music? a definite potential for a great witness. utilize gods gift and sow the musical seed of your testimony! |
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BSC
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since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919New York, USA |
This is just beautiful, I could almost hear the music in the background. And such a clear message, just lovely. Bonnie |
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Alle'cram Senior Member
since 2000-02-28
Posts 1816Texas |
You have a hit record in my book. Love this. Friends, family and life in general can fail us but we can depend on HIM, just look to Him for the answer and peace. Marcy |
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Jester59701 Member
since 2000-02-29
Posts 154 |
UndyingLove, "Been there, done that, deja vu" This definitly will make a good song. Thanks for putting it so well. I'd love to hear that song.Keep up the good works. Jester< !signature--> [This message has been edited by Jester59701 (edited 04-29-2000).] |
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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee |
Dear UndyingLove, With grace and love in your verse, this is a heart song of beauty! God bless you as I sincerely appreciate the faith in your verse. It would be a blessing to hear your words in music. Sincerely, Rwood |
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