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rwood
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since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793
Tennessee

0 posted 2000-04-25 07:34 PM


A mountain of ancient trees
Bowing to touch the spilling
of cold, clear water
Across rocks of molton age
Fingers of fern waving
To get attention beneath the canopy
Of shade and filtered light
The grapevine nets
Catching dreams
Like prehistoric spiderwebs
Moss grows beneath my feet
I stand and take root
I breath in the humid drops
Of mist within the clouds
Hovering among the trunks
Of strength and fertility
Up high, life is still
The mystical mountains of old
You can watch the mushrooms sprout
If you stand quietly
You can hear the Lady's Slipper
Walk across the fallen logs
The smell of light beams
Through the tree leaves
Are like warm honeysuckle breezes
The Song of the birds
Bounces off the cliff walls
And comes back to them
In their quiet dark hiding
So that they never feel alone
Flora and fern, woody lineage
Sticks of broken boughs
One can always trod
Lightly, and ever so quietly
And hear the voice of God

© Copyright 2000 Regina Wood - All Rights Reserved
ellie LeJeune
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since 2000-01-10
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King of Prussia, PA USA
1 posted 2000-04-25 07:51 PM


Oh, Regina, How breathtaking this poem is. I felt as if I were there. You described every detail so full of life and vitality. I'm glad you are here with us again. Love, Ellie

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deleeme
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since 1999-10-09
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NEW ENGLAND, USA
2 posted 2000-04-25 08:04 PM


Regina,
What wonderful poetic descriptions you give-Oh to SEE things with Your eyes, and to FEEL
them with Your heeart--Thank you for sharing these things with us.  To me, the Great Smoky Mountians are kind of like Heaven--I've never been there, but I have heard a lot of Great things about it!!!

              David


 "Our Creativity points to a Higher Creator--we couldn't have just happened, and for what ability we may possess--to God be the glory." -dlw-



BSC
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3 posted 2000-04-25 08:52 PM


Regina - Oh, how I love the smoky mountains. The imagery you have created with your words is incredible. And what a picture you've painted with your pen.  Just beautiful.  Bonnie
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4 posted 2000-04-25 11:31 PM


RWood~
This talks to me softly, as nature does.
I am at ease.  As though I returned to the beautiful area of which you speak .. and found a wonderful serenity.
Thank you for sharing.
~*Marge*~


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WhtDove
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since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245
Illinois
5 posted 2000-04-26 10:16 AM


Oh Regina! You took me back to the mountains of Colorado!

This is awesome, in your imagery, you take one right there, and they're able to witness what it is you see! That is excellent writing!  I love the sun shining through the trees, the sound of water rushing, the birds singing their praise. Most excellent!

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When you can't make up your mind,
Which way is right for you,
Stop and softly ask yourself,
"What Would Jesus Do?"

rwood
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since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793
Tennessee
6 posted 2000-04-26 09:17 PM


Thanks everyone so much. I pray that everyone can feel what I feel here in this beautiful place. I invite all to join nature in the mountains. It's as if it is a piece of heaven. You all just make it better...much better!
Sincerely,
Rwood

Pepper
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since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079
Southern Florida
7 posted 2000-04-29 10:02 AM


Gorgeous imagery, Rwood ...
Left me with a peaceful feeling and a smile in my heart .....
Excellent writing .....

Alle'cram
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since 2000-02-28
Posts 1816
Texas
8 posted 2000-04-29 01:51 PM


Regina, A gift from God, you have. This poem captured the sweetess and sounds of God's nature, sight of mountains from beneath the
shaded tree. I found myself feeling so light hearted reading this work of art. Love, Marcy

son of man
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since 2000-04-25
Posts 125

9 posted 2000-04-29 07:50 PM


such beatiful imagery, i was wisked away to this wonderful place. captivating, my soul sighs a sigh of fascination.
great work!

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