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Forrest Cain
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since 2000-04-21
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Chas.,W.V. USA

0 posted 2000-04-23 01:12 AM


Trancedent Wonder

a voice it calls
a word it sings
like curves of color
down angel wings
a gentle whisper
gentler still
than the lonley cry
of a whippoorwill
a song of love
and hope and joy
he calls my name
this celeste voice
the voice says come
this I give
you must die
that you might live
and tracing the clouds
with the edge of a wing
the angels cry
to hear God sing
with tears of joy
my soul they hold
and wrap around
and gently fold
his loving hands
about my heart
and lifts me up
beyond the
stars.
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[This message has been edited by Forrest Cain (edited 04-23-2000).]

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ellie LeJeune
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since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156
King of Prussia, PA USA
1 posted 2000-04-23 01:22 AM


Forrest; Wonderful poem! " and gently fold His loving hands around my heart"! beautiful. Well done. Ellie

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Marge Tindal
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2 posted 2000-04-23 09:53 PM


Forrest~
This is absolutely beautiful.
It just flows down the page
as the Spirit of God flows through
my life.
How much I enjoyed you sharing this.
Thank you ... a special Easter gift
that I shall treasure.
~*Marge*~



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Mike
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since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462

3 posted 2000-04-23 10:23 PM


Wonderful read.  Well written.
WhtDove
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since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245
Illinois
4 posted 2000-04-23 10:23 PM


Purely BEAUTIFUL! Bravo!
sandgrain
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since 1999-09-21
Posts 3662
Sycamore, IL, USA
5 posted 2000-04-24 04:04 PM


Your great talent is oozing!!!!Fantastic imagery.  I could feel the joy, awe and peace.
deleeme
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since 1999-10-09
Posts 1766
NEW ENGLAND, USA
6 posted 2000-04-25 08:33 PM


Death angels- for the righteous- are real LIFE ANGELS-ushing us into the eternal & everlasting realms of Glory--you have a very nice way of describing it.   David
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