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rainchild
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since 2000-04-14
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0 posted 2000-04-22 09:24 PM


Master Of The Storm


By the window she sat in silence,
as nights dark curtain fell.
She watches the trees waltz with
the breeze as storm clouds swiftly swells.
Fierce lightening strikes across the sky,
stirring thoughts of yesterday.
Of a stormy night and three little boys
who have long since gone away.
How they gathered close beside her,
till the storm had blown away.
And as memories drift into her mind,
her eyes now close to pray.........
Oh mighty God, master of all storms,
please hear the words I say.
Reach down your hand and calm the storms
within their lives today.


© Copyright 2000 rainchild - All Rights Reserved
Forrest Cain
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since 2000-04-21
Posts 306
Chas.,W.V. USA
1 posted 2000-04-22 11:45 PM


I liked this poem. Very well written and
flows well. Look forward to more.

WhtDove
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since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245
Illinois
2 posted 2000-04-23 12:51 PM


Welcome to Spiritual!
I liked this very much! God can calm any storm!

Have a Happy Easter!

LindaMac
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since 2000-04-16
Posts 23
Houston, Texas, USA
3 posted 2000-04-23 12:55 PM


It sounds like you really miss those boys...this was really lovely. Linda
ellie LeJeune
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since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156
King of Prussia, PA USA
4 posted 2000-04-23 01:29 AM


Rainchild; A prayer from a mothers heart, that I surely can identify with. Lovely poem. Welcome and Happy Easter. Ellie

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BSC
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5 posted 2000-04-23 09:40 AM


This is lovely, His love is so very calming. Bonnie
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since 1999-11-06
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6 posted 2000-04-23 09:54 AM


RainChild~
The fervent prayer of all mothers when
our children are apart from us.
Beautifully written.
And after the storm ... the calm.
~*Marge*~


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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sandgrain
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since 1999-09-21
Posts 3662
Sycamore, IL, USA
7 posted 2000-04-24 04:21 PM


A touching piece beautifully written.
deleeme
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since 1999-10-09
Posts 1766
NEW ENGLAND, USA
8 posted 2000-04-25 08:17 PM


Welcome, indeed-RAINCHILD--What a delightful poem you grace us with- the imagry is wonderful and the ending is very striking.
Please share more of your wonderful works with us--we want to be touched & inspired!

                 David


 "Our Creativity points to a Higher Creator--we couldn't have just happened, and for what ability we may possess--to God be the glory." -dlw-



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