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Elizabeth Santos
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0 posted 2000-04-17 07:28 AM


One God

Gentle adoration on the Virgin Mary’s face
And passing by the pilgrims looking up in reverent grace
For this is more than just a shrine, facades in fine relief
For every candle lit, a prayer; for every prayer, belief

This place in old Jerusalem, the origins of Eve
A temple once destroyed still lives for those who still believe
They come from all around the world and pray in humble awe
In Yiddish or in any tongue before the Wailing Wall

A place within Cambodia, a temple of refuge
Withstood the bombs and sordid wrath and terror of Kmer Rouge
They damaged walls but not the faith, the pilgrims still appear
Ankar Vat remains a holy shrine throughout the years

The Kaaba sits in Mecca, where the millions come to pray
And walk around it seven times in Islams given way
They bathe in waters then into a mosque they fall and kneel
Rituals that cleanse past deeds and help the spirit heal

The sounds of soul resound from out the little southern church
Echoing the faith and love within the souls they search
Clapping hands and vibrant songs, swaying in the pews
It’s spirituals handed down from generations past they use

The pilgrimage to holy shrines are echos of the past
As long as there is faith, religious rites will surely last
To each his own and each his faith, each worship in his place
Seems to me that all are blessed with one God’s Heavenly Grace

Elizabeth Santos



[This message has been edited by Elizabeth Santos (edited 04-17-2000).]

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Marge Tindal
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1 posted 2000-04-17 07:38 AM


Elizabeth, dear friend~
Glory be His name to all.
This is very uplifting.
~*Marge*~


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BSC
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2 posted 2000-04-17 08:54 AM


Elizabeth - This is wonderful, your poem takes us around the world, sharing the faith that will always be with us.  This is just beautiful.  Bonnie
WhtDove
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3 posted 2000-04-17 10:10 AM


Liz you've out done yourself! My thoughts are they can take away buildings or destroy them, but they can't take what's inside of you. They can't take away your faith!


deleeme
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4 posted 2000-04-17 07:13 PM


Liz,
You give us a world view of devotions which are not detered, which help bring out the most noble traits in humanity.  Faith & believing are truly great sources of Spiritual & religious observances around the world.

And the more God is sought by man, the more He will be found.
Thank you for this interesting poem,  David


 "Our Creativity points to a Higher Creator--we couldn't have just happened, and for what ability we may possess--to God be the glory." -dlw-



ellie LeJeune
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5 posted 2000-04-17 07:18 PM


Liz:How wonderfully you took us to all those shrines and to think of all that worship there is really amazing! One God loves us all. I really felt the inspiration here. Ellie


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Alle'cram
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since 2000-02-28
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Texas
6 posted 2000-04-18 02:02 AM


How beautifully you captured traditions of religion. Throughout all the world, regardless of these holy traditions, still there is only one way to be forgiven our sins, the blood of Jesus.  Just beautiful. Marcy
sandgrain
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Sycamore, IL, USA
7 posted 2000-04-18 11:06 AM


Absolutely beautiful!  So often I'm saddened by the hostility between denominations in our own country, as if they're unaware of serving the same God in different ways.  You've broadened this to incorporate the world so nicely.
Pepper
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Southern Florida
8 posted 2000-04-21 03:10 PM


This is truly an inspiring piece , Liz ... I love how you showed the power of faith and that there are many different roads, to the same place ... Bless you, my friend .....
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