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achicade
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since 2000-04-02
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Marietta, GA USA

0 posted 2000-04-09 09:29 PM



A pair of Goldfinches came to visit today
They came into my yard to play
God sent them to me, that I know
To tell me spring is on the way!

The days grow longer, the air grows warm,
New shoots from the ground are born.
The Robins fly with sticks and straw,
The earth is anew, once more reborn.

The children laugh and play with mirth,
Spring is the time of hope and rebirth.
And like the goldfinches that visited today,
I'm glad to see spring is on its way!



    

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BSC
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since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919
New York, USA
1 posted 2000-04-09 10:09 PM


With the snow here this morning, I'm glad to know it too.....This was encouraging and uplifting....Such a sweet poem. Thanks for sharing it.
WhtDove
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since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245
Illinois
2 posted 2000-04-09 10:10 PM


Refreshing! I'm glad to see Spring coming too!    Lovely poem, and finches are so tiny and pretty aren't they?  Thanks for the uplift.

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YOUR LIFE IS NOT A COINCIDENCE. IT'S A REFLECTION OF YOU!



deleeme
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since 1999-10-09
Posts 1766
NEW ENGLAND, USA
3 posted 2000-04-09 10:22 PM


The sings of Spring are so wonderful to behold anew after the winters deadness--here where I live, we look forward with much antipation to the return of the Humming birds.  Thank you Deb, for your lovely picture of Spring.
  WELCOME TO OUR FORUM,we look forward to more great poems.
  P.S. Thank you for your kind replies ,too.
           David

 "Our Creativity points to a Higher Creator--we couldn't have just happened, and for what ability we may possess--to God be the glory." -dlw-



ellie LeJeune
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since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156
King of Prussia, PA USA
4 posted 2000-04-09 10:36 PM


dear Deb; WELCOME! Beautiful spring poem. I could see those little birds. We're glad you've joined us here. look forward to reading more of your poetry.  Ellie

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Songbird
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since 1999-12-15
Posts 2184
Missouri
5 posted 2000-04-09 11:07 PM


Loved your Spring poem! I'm a birdwatcher also, and this was just up my alley. Hope to see more of your poems.
songwater
Junior Member
since 2000-04-02
Posts 32
Marietta,Ga.
6 posted 2000-04-10 10:40 AM


Debbie, that was a beautiful poem..Will you help me write a song?

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achicade
Member
since 2000-04-02
Posts 66
Marietta, GA USA
7 posted 2000-04-10 06:19 PM


Thanks for all the wonderful comments.  And Songwater, Why certainly!!  My place or yours?


 God bless you all. :-)
-debbie-

achicade
Member
since 2000-04-02
Posts 66
Marietta, GA USA
8 posted 2000-04-10 06:19 PM


Thanks for all the wonderful comments.  And Songwater, Why certainly!!  My place or yours?


 God bless you all. :-)
-debbie-

achicade
Member
since 2000-04-02
Posts 66
Marietta, GA USA
9 posted 2000-04-10 06:20 PM


Thanks for all the wonderful comments.  And Songwater, Why certainly!!  My place or yours?


 God bless you all. :-)
-debbie-

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