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ROSE MARY
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since 2000-04-09
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scranton,pa. u.s.a

0 posted 2000-04-09 12:39 PM



"NEVER FORGET WHAT YOU HAVE SEEN"

I STOOD BY A FULL BLOSSOMED TREE
AS THEY DRAGGED YOU UP THE HILL
WHAT HAS HE DONE? I WONDERED
THAT THE SOLIDERS ARE SO EAGER TO KILL

I WALKED OVER TO A WOMAN
WHO WAS CRYING ON HER KNEES
PLEASE LADY CAN YOU TELL ME
WHAT THIS MAN HAS DONE TO DIE ON THAT TREE?

SHE LOOKED UP AT ME WITH LOVING EYES
THAT WERE FILLED WITH JOY, YET ALSO SORROW
HER VOICE QUIVERED AS SHE SAID TO ME
"THAT IS GOD'S SON CHRIST THE GIVER OF YOUR TOMORROWS"

AS I HEARD THE HAMMER POUNDING THE NAILS
I ASKED WHAT DO YOU MEAN?
SHE TOOK MY HAND AND HELD IT TIGHT
SAYING"NEVER FORGET WHAT YOU HAVE SEEN"

FOR YOU ARE WITNESSING A REBIRTH
THE NEW BEGINNING FOR ONE AND ALL
A WAY FOR EVERY MAN,WOMAN AND CHILD
TO BE FREED OF SIN AND THE DEVIL'S CALL

I HAD TO GO WALK CLOSER TO HIM
FOR I WAS REALLY PUZZLED BY THIS TIME
AS I STOOD BENEATH THE CROSS OF CHRIST
I FELT A PRESENCE SO DEVINE

THE SKY GREW DARK IN A MYSTERIOUS WAY
FLASHES OF LIGHTING WERE EVERYWHERE
CHRIST WHISPERED "FORGIVE THEM FATHER
WITH SUCH TENDER LOVING CARE

THAT I FELT TEARS RUNNING DOWN MY FACE
FOR THIS MAN I NEVER KNEW
BUT I FELT MY HEART FILL WITH HIS LOVE
WISHING THERE WAS SOMETHING I COULD DO

SO BEFORE THIS CROSS I FELL TO MY KNEES
PRAYING DEAR GOD PLEASE SAVE YOUR SON
WHEN I HEARD A MERE WHISPER SAYING
"HE IS ON HIS WAY HOME HIS WORK IS DONE"

THEN IN THAT INSTANT
NO MORE SORROW DID I FEEL
FOR I KNEW THAT CHRIST WOULD LIVE AGAIN
AND THAT TO ALL OF US HE WOULD REVEAL

THAT HE IS THE DOORWAY TO HEAVEN
THE FORGIVER OF ALL OUR SINS
THAT IN HIM WE CAN FIND TRUE LOVE
AND A NEW WAY TO START OVER AGAIN

SO REMEMBER ALWAYS THE STORY
OF THE CROSS AND JESUS CHRIST
FOR THE BLOOD THAT HE SHED THAT DAY
IS THE BLOOD NEEDED TO CHANGE A LIFE

WRITTEN BY
ROSE MARY (c)4/4/2000
SADIE1030

  


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WhtDove
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since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245
Illinois
1 posted 2000-04-09 12:50 PM


WELCOME! This is spectacular! You've covered the death on the cross in a great way. The darkness that fell over the land, and wow. I could picture it! Great work.

Please check your email for a special welcome!

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YOUR LIFE IS NOT A COINCIDENCE. IT'S A REFLECTION OF YOU!



Marge Tindal
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2 posted 2000-04-09 03:01 PM


Rose Mary~
This is a beautiful rendering
from your heart.
Very vividly portrayed.
Welcome to Passion's.
~*Marge*~


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Songbird
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since 1999-12-15
Posts 2184
Missouri
3 posted 2000-04-09 03:30 PM


What a grand entrance you have made to Passions with this poem! Hope to see more of your poetry.
BSC
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since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919
New York, USA
4 posted 2000-04-09 03:38 PM


Rose Mary - What a wonderful poem, written beautifully....a picture of words.  Bonnie
ellie LeJeune
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since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156
King of Prussia, PA USA
5 posted 2000-04-09 07:01 PM


Dear Rose Mary; WELCOME! I agree that you have made a glorious entrance. this poem is written so beautifully and the picture you have painted with your poetic words is breathtakiing. Can't wait to read more of you poems. You'll love it here as you find we are one big loving family who will encourage and support you! Ellie

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deleeme
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since 1999-10-09
Posts 1766
NEW ENGLAND, USA
6 posted 2000-04-10 05:50 PM


Yes, Rose Mary--This is a fantastic presentation of the death of Christ in a very vivid and personal portrayal. We are Blessed t o have you here to share such a wonderful work & message.  WELCOME INDEED, I hope you'll truly feel at home among us,  David

 "Our Creativity points to a Higher Creator--we couldn't have just happened, and for what ability we may possess--to God be the glory." -dlw-



WhtDove
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245
Illinois
7 posted 2000-04-11 12:21 PM


I hope you'll feel at home here too. We have many great poets among us, I hope you feel free to read and respond to them also.
If you have any question feel free to email me, you can click on the link above where you see my name.

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