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Songbird
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since 1999-12-15
Posts 2184
Missouri

0 posted 2000-03-30 12:30 PM



Time passed
And the food was nearly gone
When
Jacob said to his sons
"You need to go back to Egypt
To buy us some more food."

Judah, another one of his sons, said
"Father, the man warned us
You will not see my face again
Unless your brother Benjamin is with you.

If you send Benjamin with us
We will go"
Jacob lamented again
"Why did you bring this trouble on me by
Telling the man you had another brother?"

"Father, we simply answered his questions
How were we to know, he would say
Bring your brother down here?"

Then Judah pleaded
Send the boy along with me
We must go at once
That you and our children may live
And not die.
I will personally guarantee his safety
If I do not bring him back to you
I will bear the blame the rest of my life.

Thus another son had pledged responsibilty
For a life.



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ellie LeJeune
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since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156
King of Prussia, PA USA
1 posted 2000-03-30 06:22 AM


thanks for another great installment. I love the beautiful way you are putting this to verse. Love, Ellie

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rwood
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since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793
Tennessee
2 posted 2000-03-30 07:37 AM


I've read each entry...And each is done in skill. God bless you as you are touched by the scripture that leads you and us. Beautifully done.
Sincerely,
Rwood

WhtDove
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245
Illinois
3 posted 2000-03-30 10:42 AM


This is like sitting on the edge of your chair in suspense waiting to see what happens...    Next???  
deleeme
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since 1999-10-09
Posts 1766
NEW ENGLAND, USA
4 posted 2000-03-30 06:24 PM


Thank You SeptSong for another wonderful installment.  I think this section as I reflect upon says to me--(1)If one is to succeed in life- there will be a lot of things which we must,though we may have a strong dislike of it-ah the harsh realities of life./(1) Also if we are going to make a go of life--sometime we need to take risks and chances--or just fold up and die,?(3) it also teaches that those once pitful and irresponsible need not always to be-we can mature and change-we can do better today than we did in the past--the choice is ours!

Thanks for your thoughht provoking poems,  David

 "Our Creativity points to a Higher Creator--we couldn't have just happened, and for what ability we may possess--to God be the glory." -dlw-



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