»
Archives
»
Spiritual Journeys
»
Unto You For Good (Part one) Genesis 37
| Spiritual Journeys |
|
Unto You For Good (Part one) Genesis 37 |
|
|
Songbird Member Elite
since 1999-12-15
Posts 2184Missouri |
Cast down By brothers Into the pit Leaving him for dead Opportunity For profit Gives reason For a second thought Why not just sell him? After all he is Our brother. Conjuring An explanation For the disappearance Of their brother To justify his absence They tear his despised robe Dipping it in the blood Of a goat Feigning ignorance They present it to Their father Who weeps... |
||
| © Copyright 2000 Marcia Estep - All Rights Reserved | |||
|
BSC
Moderator
Member Elite
since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919New York, USA |
Septsong - So simplistic, yet the words are so strong....this is really moving... Bonnie |
||
|
deleeme Senior Member
since 1999-10-09
Posts 1766NEW ENGLAND, USA |
Tell the story my friend-bring out it's details(some gruesome) in your own special style-we look forward to each installment, Thank You, David "Our Creativity points to a Higher Creator--we couldn't have just happened, and for what ability we may possess--to God be the glory." -dlw- |
||
|
WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Joseph and his coat of many colors. You did a good account of the scripture, I'm on to the next  |
||
|
Stephen Jones Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 53 |
Septsong, this is beautiful freeverse! So coherent and true to the spirit of the scriptures of which it speaks. To me what made this so palatable was how you brought out the thoughts and emotions behind the actions with striking simplicity. Can't wait to read the others. I am very new at even trying non-metrical verse, I hope I can do half as well as you! |
||
|
ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA |
Septsong; Beautiful, on to the next. E 02 |
||
|
|
⇧ top of page ⇧ |
|
| All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format. | ||
