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deleeme
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since 1999-10-09
Posts 1766
NEW ENGLAND, USA

0 posted 2000-03-24 05:19 AM


S avior give me strength today,

P ardon when I go astray

R edeem my tainted sin-touched soul,

I seek that You would make me whole

N othing, by myself I am,

G race through Faith, I enter in

T o give me new life, yes, You came,

I know I'll never be the same

M ake me meet, Your will to do,

E njoying Life's Springtime, through and through!


 "Our Creativity points to a Higher Creator--we couldn't have just happened, and for what ability we may possess--to God be the glory." -dlw-



© Copyright 2000 David L. White - All Rights Reserved
ellie LeJeune
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since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156
King of Prussia, PA USA
1 posted 2000-03-24 06:05 AM


Dear David; Simply written, simply devine! Your talents are high flying, just like some other poem I read. This one is so beautiful...:nothing by myself I am".. glorious!   Love, Ellie

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rwood
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since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793
Tennessee
2 posted 2000-03-24 06:38 AM


Wonderful David. Simply Wonderful.
Sincerely,
Rwood

BSC
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since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919
New York, USA
3 posted 2000-03-24 11:13 AM


David - There is simply no end....this is beautiful....thank you, Bonnie
Songbird
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since 1999-12-15
Posts 2184
Missouri
4 posted 2000-03-25 10:12 AM


Beautiful poem/prayer short and to the point. Good writing here.
WhtDove
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245
Illinois
5 posted 2000-03-25 08:38 PM


David, what an acrostic! You are sure gifted with singing his praise...you can write about anything  
Pepper
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since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079
Southern Florida
6 posted 2000-03-27 02:30 PM


Simply wonderful David ...

 A soul that writes from the heart and shares it, truly gives a gift extraordinaire!
Shannon






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