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Aiden Kelly
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since 2000-02-14
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Ft. Wayne, IN USA

0 posted 2000-03-22 05:57 PM


~The Son's Light~

Sun
  with golden rays
  falling like rain
  through the crystal sky
Son
  shining through
  the hearts of man
  saving him with grace


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BSC
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since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919
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1 posted 2000-03-22 06:09 PM


Oh, so beautifully, perfectly simple....so much truth, in so few words....Thanks for this one...Bonnie
rwood
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since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793
Tennessee
2 posted 2000-03-22 10:10 PM


So profound and exquisite in such few words. I love the way it speaks volumes.
Sincerely,
Rwood

ellie LeJeune
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since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156
King of Prussia, PA USA
3 posted 2000-03-22 11:19 PM


Dear Aiden; Glorious simplicity and all the truth we need to know, Well done.  Ellie

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Stephen Jones
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since 2000-02-26
Posts 53

4 posted 2000-03-23 01:26 AM


Beautiful simplicity!!!!!!

At times, to give forth less is more!
A smaller key may spring the door
most obstinate to greater tools.
For sometimes much is said of fools.
Yet power hides in smaller things
to lift men's spirits up on wings
and help their once cold hearts adore!




 

WhtDove
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since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245
Illinois
5 posted 2000-03-23 10:59 AM


Short and it says so very much! And He is like that rain falling upon us, the cleansing it brings.  Just wonderful!

 <*\\\><

There's only two ways you can go...
One way you can save your riches,
And the other will save your soul.
Rich Mullins

Aiden Kelly
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since 2000-02-14
Posts 148
Ft. Wayne, IN USA
6 posted 2000-03-23 02:35 PM


thank you all so much for your encouraging words!  sorry i haven't been in to just read in a while but i appreciate the support i get here!    God bless you all!  
dhuron
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since 2000-03-19
Posts 476

7 posted 2000-03-28 04:41 AM


Such a Concise and profound poem Aiden.

Great Job indeed, I really enjoy your works.

 The glory of friendship is not the outstretched hand, not the kindly smile, not the joy of companionship; it is the spiritual inspiration that comes to one when he discovers that someone believes in him and is willing to trust him with his friendship."

--Ralph Waldo Emerson


Songbird
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since 1999-12-15
Posts 2184
Missouri
8 posted 2000-03-29 12:40 PM


The Sun shines through the rain
The Son shines through the rain
The Son shines on the just and the unjust
To show us all,
How he loves us so very much.

(Love your Son shine poem!)

Alle'cram
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since 2000-02-28
Posts 1816
Texas
9 posted 2000-03-29 01:13 AM


Love it. The simplest things so meaningful.
Just beautiful.  Marcy

Denise
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10 posted 2000-03-29 10:25 AM


This says it all in so few words! Wonderfully written!

Denise

Aiden Kelly
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since 2000-02-14
Posts 148
Ft. Wayne, IN USA
11 posted 2000-03-29 06:21 PM


thank you all for your encouragement!  it increases my confidence so much!  
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