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rwood
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since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793
Tennessee

0 posted 2000-03-22 07:02 AM


Bouncing up and down
On this man made rollercoaster ride
Gliding wildly around the curves
Daily fears, of Daily down hills
Oh God, I'm afraid of heights

To and fro, there I go
Better get buckled in
I think I'll be sick
Hey, Stop! let me off
I don't want to ride again!

Some people laugh
In the thrill of it all
I don't like the rickety design
Life's little ups and downs
Come around
And there I am, standing in line

But today I will face
The largest hill
I'm gonna ride up front!
I imagine the passenger by my side
Is my savior, loving God

He will keep me, safe from harm
And show me the wonders of life
He's not disappointed when I cry out
Because Sometimes
I have to close my eyes

He gives me strength to hang on
White knuckled all the way
He gives me faith
to take the plunge
Even when I'm lost and afraid

When the first dip comes along
I'm gonna raise my hands up high
And Scream from the depths of me
Silently,
On the rollercoaster ride


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BSC
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since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919
New York, USA
1 posted 2000-03-22 07:51 AM


WooHoo-----What a great poem R...My stomach was churning just reading it....So nice to know that if I am ever forced (and I would have to be)to go on a roller coaster, He will be in the car with me....I loved this....
Thanks, Bonnie

ellie LeJeune
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since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156
King of Prussia, PA USA
2 posted 2000-03-22 08:03 AM


Dear R; What a great analogy! You are right on, that's what life is without His Love and guidance. You could'nt get me on one of those things for all the tea in China! Love, Ellie

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erieval
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since 2000-03-21
Posts 56
northeasten pa.
3 posted 2000-03-22 08:53 AM


Dear R,
Great poem. We all need to remember that no matter what life holds for us, He is always by our side.
May the Lord always ride beside you.
Praise the Lord,
Erie

WhtDove
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since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245
Illinois
4 posted 2000-03-22 10:47 AM


This is great! It reminds me though of, and wherever I heard it not sure, but to put God in the drivers seat.

He shall make your paths straight.  Life is like a roller coaster ride isn't it? I love how you've described this. With God by our side and trust in Him, we can do all things.

deleeme
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since 1999-10-09
Posts 1766
NEW ENGLAND, USA
5 posted 2000-03-22 05:48 PM


RWOOD(Just what does that R stand for?)
  you really took us for a ride here--but we made it through okay--Life IS like that, but as long as the Lord's on our side and by our side--to going may still get rough-but He can help us to hang on, and claim the victory.   Thank you for the wonderfully vivid and apt analogy!
                 David

 "Our Creativity points to a Higher Creator--we couldn't have just happened, and for what ability we may possess--to God be the glory." -dlw-



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