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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow 
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You Build Towering Castles You build towering castles in the glorious heavens accompanying all the sweet angels of your sphere they dance among your heavenly stars delightfully romancing wings of paradise amid your soft smile Accompanying all the sweet angels of your sphere gloriously raising their true voices in heavenly song righteous bells chime to the harmony of their theme as multitudes of organ rhythms do echo throughout They dance among your heavenly stars delightfully each step a graceful melody of peaceful movement spinning in warm fluffy clouds of flowing foreverness together they float towards greater heights of glory Romancing wings of paradise amid your soft smile soft hues of heaven branch blossoms of fruitful love where flowering beauty of angelic daintiness prevails you build towering castles in the glorious heavens. |
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BSC
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Member Elite
since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919New York, USA |
Lost Dreamer - You have created a perfect picture with your beautiful words....I could just see it all so clearly, thanks for sharing this.....Bonnie |
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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow |
Bonnie: Thank You so much, glad you liked it, I was thinking about my Mom who died many years before as I wrote this. |
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ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA |
Dear lost Dreamer; What a lovely picture you have painted with beautiful poetic words. Very inspiring. Ellie 02 |
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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee |
Dear Lost Dreamer, What flowing beauty! It completely billows with all of heaven's inspiration. Thanks for sharing Sincerely, Rwood |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Don't know if the other took, I'm having problems tonight. Grrr.... In jist, I said welcome home, I've missed you around here! I'm glad to see you posting again Gloria! This is a beautifully flowing poem and peaceful. I loved this line... spinning in warm fluffy clouds of flowing foreverness Sorry about your Mom, but these are beautiful thought to be thinking of her. I bet you miss her. HUGS! |
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erieval Member
since 2000-03-21
Posts 56northeasten pa. |
Dear Lost Dreamer, Absolutely beautiful! It is easy to see that the Lord speaks to you. What wonderful expressions of descriptions of heaven. May the Lord always whisper in your ear. God bless. Erie |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
I love how each line of the first stanza started the succeding verses and how the first line of the first stanza was also the last line of the last stanza. Is there a name for this form? This is beautifully written Gloria! |
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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow |
I thank all of you for taking the time to read, and all you kind compliments. Denise: I really don't know a name for it, but it is very fun to put together. |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
Gorgeous Gloria ... Your writings always take me to such beautiful places .... I love seeing through your eyes .. Your imagery is perfection ... and your heart is golden ........ [This message has been edited by Pepper (edited 03-27-2000).] |
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Songbird Member Elite
since 1999-12-15
Posts 2184Missouri |
This is too beautiful for words. Thank you for blessing me with it. It is definitely one of your best! |
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LoveBug
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Member Elite
since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
This is truely a beautiful poem! Keep up the good work! "We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars." -Oscar Wilde |
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Alle'cram Senior Member
since 2000-02-28
Posts 1816Texas |
Dear Lost Dreamer, I don't know how I missed this one. Oh, the picture and sounds of the angels singing, what a perfect picture you have crafted. I know our Mothers are singing with the melody of this heavenly host. Just breathtaking! God Bless marcy |
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deleeme Senior Member
since 1999-10-09
Posts 1766NEW ENGLAND, USA |
Dear Gloria, This is a Glorious vision of Supernal peace and loveliness that you present to us here. Such a place as described surely is one which ought to cause us to want to be a part of it, and to join loved ones there as well. David "Our Creativity points to a Higher Creator--we couldn't have just happened, and for what ability we may possess--to God be the glory." -dlw- |
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