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Ruthie J
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since 2000-03-20
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0 posted 2000-03-21 09:12 AM



When the peace of the Lord surrounds me,
I feel complete.

When the love of the Lord envelopes me,
I feel complete.

When the joy of the Lord fills me,
I feel complete.

When the presence of the Lord overwhelms me,
I feel complete.


Why then:
When the time comes for me to kneel before my Lord,
Do I fail to worship him completely?

PRAISE THE LORD OH MY SOUL, AND ALL THAT IS WITHIN ME PRAISE HIS HOLY NAME.

© Copyright 2000 Ruthie J - All Rights Reserved
BSC
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1 posted 2000-03-21 10:51 AM


Ruthie - What a beautiful prayer...thanks for sharing it.....
Dennis L. White
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since 2000-02-17
Posts 1463
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2 posted 2000-03-21 11:20 AM


Ruthie, We are sometimes stiff-necked and like rebelious children, it's not enough to know we are complete in the Lord, our hearts must follow this knowledge into humble submission. Thanks for sharing this contemplative prayer with us. Dennis :^)
ellie LeJeune
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since 2000-01-10
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King of Prussia, PA USA
3 posted 2000-03-21 11:21 AM


Dear Ruthie; Sounds just like a heavenly song. Very lovely. Thank you. Love, Ellie

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rwood
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since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793
Tennessee
4 posted 2000-03-21 06:48 PM


We are all too human aren't we Ruthie. I often wonder how he thinks of us at all in as little as we think of him sometimes, but that's what makes God, so great. A truly great prayer and thought.
Sincerely,
Rwood

Lost Dreamer
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since 1999-06-20
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Somewhere near the Rainbow
5 posted 2000-03-21 06:56 PM


This is wonderful, and we all lose our grip at one time or another and it's at that time most of all that God's hand is the one that saves us from ourselves. Thanks for writing and sharing this poem.

[This message has been edited by Lost Dreamer (edited 03-21-2000).]

deleeme
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since 1999-10-09
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NEW ENGLAND, USA
6 posted 2000-03-21 07:08 PM


I like your poem here, Ruthie --it makes you think--is God the only one out of which we can expect full measure--and if we feel His completeness and yet fail to use and act upon it, are we really complete after all?
I like the scriptuaral resolve that you give as a conclusion---David

 "Our Creativity points to a Higher Creator--we couldn't have just happened, and for what ability we may possess--to God be the glory." -dlw-



Songbird
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since 1999-12-15
Posts 2184
Missouri
7 posted 2000-03-21 10:07 PM


I really like this poem it reminds me that it is easy to serve God in the mountaintop experiences yet harder to give him praise in our everyday mundane lives. The valleys we also tend to draw closer to him, or pull further away. We humans are so fickle, we rely too much on our emotions. As I said already I really like the message you have written here. Hope to see more of you poetry.
WhtDove
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since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245
Illinois
8 posted 2000-03-22 10:42 AM


I love this! I love how you've written this with a real stopper in the end. Makes you really stop and think! Excellent!
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