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rwood
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since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793
Tennessee

0 posted 2000-03-17 10:35 PM


Heaven's musical notes
Hang in a'cappello
Celebrating happy birthdays
To someone new each night

A lone candle, never to be blown out
Takes it's place, proudly
The Genesis of light

One sky divided
Between day and night
Gives everyone the opportunity
To receive the blessing

When we sleep, the world is dusted
With the glittering dew of dawn
Proof that all went well in the heavens

For it is written in the stars
That he who, created them
The firmaments in heaven, also created you


[This message has been edited by rwood (edited 03-17-2000).]

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deleeme
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since 1999-10-09
Posts 1766
NEW ENGLAND, USA
1 posted 2000-03-17 10:51 PM


RWOOD,  This is a lovely teatment & application of  the Creation account, and nice use of the phrase which Rebbecca suggested. I see the Challenges have begun, and you, my friend started it off very well.  Thank You,  David
WhtDove
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245
Illinois
2 posted 2000-03-18 12:03 PM


Well, you guys sure jumped on this! You've done a superb job!  
I really like how you incorporated this with scriptural references too  

ellie LeJeune
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since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156
King of Prussia, PA USA
3 posted 2000-03-18 07:11 AM


Dear R; This is wonderful! We're going to have the entire Bible put to poetry! Inspiration is aglow among us with all the chalenges. R, you made genesis come alive for me. Thank you, Ellie

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sandgrain
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since 1999-09-21
Posts 3662
Sycamore, IL, USA
4 posted 2000-03-18 10:13 PM


ellie, I like that idea so I'd read it more and relate it to all the wonderful people on here too.  A beautiful writing rwood.
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