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Aiden Kelly
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since 2000-02-14
Posts 148
Ft. Wayne, IN USA

0 posted 2000-03-14 05:33 PM


~Doxology~

The Cross --
Symbol divine,
Salvation given,
Wrongs redeemed.

The Love --
No conditions,
God given,
Forever felt.

The Hope --
Heaven sent,
Grace given,
Heart held.

The Faith --
Unseeing eyes,
Blessings given,
Certain conviction.

The Life --
Refining fire,
Faith lived,
God guided.


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ellie LeJeune
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since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156
King of Prussia, PA USA
1 posted 2000-03-14 05:49 PM


Dear Aiden; The profound simplicity of this poem is incredible. the last sentence "God guided", is so wonderfull to me. Welcome here! I'm looking forward to seeing more of your poetry.  Ellie  P>S> Thank you for your lovely reply to my poem!

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rwood
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since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793
Tennessee
2 posted 2000-03-14 06:46 PM


Wonderful few words but profound meanings. Very well done! Welcome Aiden! Look forward to reading more.
Sincerely,

deleeme
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since 1999-10-09
Posts 1766
NEW ENGLAND, USA
3 posted 2000-03-14 08:04 PM


It doesn't take a lot of words to speak a lot of truth. You proven that with you deft
and pointed poetry here.  Good Job, and welcome to our forum, you've to a good place.

                  David

WhtDove
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245
Illinois
4 posted 2000-03-14 08:48 PM


Welcome! Few words, strong message! I hope to see more. I loved this!!
Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648

5 posted 2000-03-14 10:31 PM


This is fabulous! Great writing with a great message!

Denise

Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554

6 posted 2000-03-14 11:00 PM


hey....im following you  (smile)
this is fantastic...i love this one...
and as you can see they all did too...and as you can also see they are so supportive and special in here...watch out for ellie, she'll steal your heart (smile)
take care, jm

Aiden Kelly
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since 2000-02-14
Posts 148
Ft. Wayne, IN USA
7 posted 2000-03-15 03:56 PM


WOW!!!  thank you all for such wonderful responses!  i'm glad you all appreciated it.

jm: you need to stop following me!  )  but you were right!

thanks to everyone for being so supportive!

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